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Freed from your pretend Love
Today I was awaken from the dream
And sent back to the reality
From that love spell you had over me
Chains that constricted tighter and tighter
But somehow I was set free
From the dungeon of your loves hell
Darker places of love that I realize….
Wasn’t Love at all
My love was a decision
That could be changed
And it changed with in
When I saw you with him
You played my face
I hope the same for you
So you can have the same stupid look
That you left on my face
Promises of you would never change
But that was a lie
When I stayed the same
But how can I now feel whole
When nothing remains
Somewhere deep within I love you
But I hate you with that same love
And sent back to the reality
From that love spell you had over me
Chains that constricted tighter and tighter
But somehow I was set free
From the dungeon of your loves hell
Darker places of love that I realize….
Wasn’t Love at all
My love was a decision
That could be changed
And it changed with in
When I saw you with him
You played my face
I hope the same for you
So you can have the same stupid look
That you left on my face
Promises of you would never change
But that was a lie
When I stayed the same
But how can I now feel whole
When nothing remains
Somewhere deep within I love you
But I hate you with that same love
Published 15th Jan 2013
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15th Jan 2013 8:00am
i have the same feelings, you love them but you hate them with a passion. i loved it!
16th Jan 2013 7:03am
How can you say you hate sumthing you onced loved so much,I may have broken your trust but baby I would never break us.I humbled myself given in to him,I felt a switch turn off and before I knew it I was unwillingly given in.Given in to his lust but constantly thinking only of us.You say your free from the Love spell I had over you,But look closely my heart is still cuffed to YOU.Emotions make you hate but love makes you resist I know you cant get over the feelings of me making your heart wanna exit...
loved ur poem -wink-
loved ur poem -wink-
See you had to explain and I am glad you mention, When I seen you with him, Tell me why my crys for your attention Went unheard, or why when I speak it's like there isn't any words,No voice of my own, You can't be in a relationship and still feel alone, It takes two to succeed, I practically begged and pleaed, But your slowly receded, My silent I love yous to your death ears, In this place where your love wasnt there to wipe my tears, Couldn't protect me from my fears of.... Falling in love again after all these years, My heart was in trusted in you for protection, but in turn you decided to neglect it, So this is my heart is at the exit!
I love your addition as usual!
I love your addition as usual!
17th Jan 2013 7:33am
I heard your cries,and i silently tuned them out,Scared that if I answered you figure my love had doubts,Doubts about what we have and what we are.Those times when you screamed I love you and I couldnt find the words to repeat it back,I pleaded with my self to find ways to love you only if you would learn how to act.I know it hurt you seeing me with him.But it hurt me more knowing I couldnt love you the way I love him.You trusted me with your heart and i accidently dropped it ,while trying so hard to protect it,Im standing here with pieces trying so hard to mend it,before your last steps really be a farewell exit
20th Jan 2013 5:34am
"But how can I now feel whole
When nothing remains
Somewhere deep within I love you
But I hate you with that same love" <----that was deep!
Emotional ink! Nice flow, poeticsoldier! :)
When nothing remains
Somewhere deep within I love you
But I hate you with that same love" <----that was deep!
Emotional ink! Nice flow, poeticsoldier! :)
