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The eyes don't lie
When you look at me
I hear you
When I look at you
Can you hear me too?
There's something so amazing about your eyes
The way they talk and don't tell lies
It's becoming my obsession
All I want to do is listen
I'm always the first one to look away
Because mine will say things I'm not ready to say
Through your eyes I can read your mind
I could look at you until I go blind
I'm curious to know if mine do the same
Can you see my feelings of pleasure and pain?
I hear you
When I look at you
Can you hear me too?
There's something so amazing about your eyes
The way they talk and don't tell lies
It's becoming my obsession
All I want to do is listen
I'm always the first one to look away
Because mine will say things I'm not ready to say
Through your eyes I can read your mind
I could look at you until I go blind
I'm curious to know if mine do the same
Can you see my feelings of pleasure and pain?
Published 15th Jan 2013
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15th Jan 2013 2:01am
short and to the point...i like that...eyes tell all if you look into them properly...sick piece...
15th Jan 2013 2:05am
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15th Jan 2013 2:51am
"I'm curious to know if mine do the same
Can you see my feelings of pleasure and pain?"
I looooove this. This is a short and sweet piece with great truth behind it. Excellent work :)
Can you see my feelings of pleasure and pain?"
I looooove this. This is a short and sweet piece with great truth behind it. Excellent work :)
15th Jan 2013 11:38am
15th Jan 2013 3:55pm
15th Jan 2013 7:17pm
I like this a lot , I actually wrote one like this a while ago , I got the term from scarface when he says "The eyes chico , they never lie" , good piece .
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