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My Insecurities Hear To Haunt Me
I would rather go blind then to see you with that woman
To look in her eyes and know she had half of me
when she doesnt amount to half of me
she's a wanna be
Im all you need so why r u so blind to see
You were the air I breathe
You were the heart that beats inside me
You were more precious to me than my own life
loved you so unconditionally
After all we been through I was there for u
Where was she?
How could this be my insecurities came to haunt me
My heart now bleeds as my body goes numb
In a state of disbelief cant be true
I lost the only man I gave my heart to
The pain I endure I will no more
out of my life I'll show you the door
That's where you'll go, that's where you'll stay
I dont have the time or day to entertain the lies u betray
The love I thought I knew was only a lie
it was never true
I cant belief I fell in love with you
A mistake was made it wont happen again
I promise myself to never fall again
To look in her eyes and know she had half of me
when she doesnt amount to half of me
she's a wanna be
Im all you need so why r u so blind to see
You were the air I breathe
You were the heart that beats inside me
You were more precious to me than my own life
loved you so unconditionally
After all we been through I was there for u
Where was she?
How could this be my insecurities came to haunt me
My heart now bleeds as my body goes numb
In a state of disbelief cant be true
I lost the only man I gave my heart to
The pain I endure I will no more
out of my life I'll show you the door
That's where you'll go, that's where you'll stay
I dont have the time or day to entertain the lies u betray
The love I thought I knew was only a lie
it was never true
I cant belief I fell in love with you
A mistake was made it wont happen again
I promise myself to never fall again
Published 14th Jan 2013
| Edited 18th Jan 2013
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I'm loving your profile pic. It's adorable :3 but anyway on to the poem. There are a few grammatical errors you should fix. In stanza one "To look in her eyes an know she had half of me." Your "an" is missing a "d." In stanza two "After all we been through I stud there with u" I don't believe you meant "stud" I think you meant stood because no definition of stud would fit this context. Aside from that, I really enjoyed reading this. My favorite part of the poem would have to be here "That's where you'll go, that's where you'll stay
I dont have the time or day to entertain the lies u betray" Excellent flow of words and powerful set of diction is used. It's quite sad that some people are blind like the guy in this poem and you can never figure out why they make the decision they do. All in all a nice read. Oh and welcome to DU! :)
I dont have the time or day to entertain the lies u betray" Excellent flow of words and powerful set of diction is used. It's quite sad that some people are blind like the guy in this poem and you can never figure out why they make the decision they do. All in all a nice read. Oh and welcome to DU! :)
18th Jan 2013 5:33pm
18th Jan 2013 5:46pm
