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My Flesh's Thorn
I never thought it was
But the truth is revealed
I couldn’t see the truth
Blinded by insanity
In the end, what I felt
Was love was nothing more
Than bits of painful images
I ran or I ran you away
And for that I paid a price
Sleepless nights casued me
To run to you in dreams
“I’ll wait at the gates for you”
These flowers, they hurt…
Published 5th Aug 2010
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5th Aug 2010 5:09pm
5th Aug 2010 5:41pm
It's so rich with despondency and real heartfelt pain...and in such a short space. The last line's a killer.
5th Aug 2010 6:13pm
5th Aug 2010 7:11pm
