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Thinking Man
Think as a man in his heart so is he
Times a plenty I’d thought of what I wish to be
To achieve, revered and be fulfilled
But, much to my thoughts than real
Those thought and planned, null achieved
Illusions call what may, hallucinations, its friend and
Dreams are all one mind subject
Mind, thinking faculty of ma-n-atomy
If ‘n thought, I be the unique
And strife in actions to be great
Yet orchestrated thoughts ne’r would be
Then, is man really his thoughts?
Times a plenty I’d thought of what I wish to be
To achieve, revered and be fulfilled
But, much to my thoughts than real
Those thought and planned, null achieved
Illusions call what may, hallucinations, its friend and
Dreams are all one mind subject
Mind, thinking faculty of ma-n-atomy
If ‘n thought, I be the unique
And strife in actions to be great
Yet orchestrated thoughts ne’r would be
Then, is man really his thoughts?
Published 5th Aug 2010
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5th Aug 2010 5:47pm
The words stretch out in this great exaggerated way...I really had to concentarte hard to get it all, but that's what I really like about it. It's intense, wise and insightful. And it all comes together great in that last line. You must have a very intelligent mind.
11th Sep 2013 8:02pm
You are indeed a thinking man
and you wrote well the thoughts
of your heart - for out of the wellspring
of the heart the mouth speaks (writes)
Nice work
and you wrote well the thoughts
of your heart - for out of the wellspring
of the heart the mouth speaks (writes)
Nice work
