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Dear Defenceless Self...
Dear Torment
Stop driving me insane
Please give me a break
Better yet
Could you try to go away?
Dear Demented self
Could you lecture me
To try and hide my
Shames?
I could be defenceless
But still content with-out
The need for self inflicted pain
Dear anger
Please could you give me strength
Against the elements so terrifying
Let yourself let me use you
To keep away those trying to tear
Us down,
Dear Walls
Don’t stand forever, please tell
Me who to let in?
And who to let you fall upon,,
Only I tear you down.
Only you can break my fall
And Dear confidence
Please come to me in bursts ,
I feel it’s overdue,
And only time will be tell if
Getting better, is
Worse than getting screwed
Dear rebellion
Stop fighting against my better judgement
Be my nothing at all ,
And dear shaken heart
Please don’t let me fall
I cannot take more of this
I can’t quit I’ve come to far
I admit life’s hard
But it never seemed as bleak as this……..
Stop driving me insane
Please give me a break
Better yet
Could you try to go away?
Dear Demented self
Could you lecture me
To try and hide my
Shames?
I could be defenceless
But still content with-out
The need for self inflicted pain
Dear anger
Please could you give me strength
Against the elements so terrifying
Let yourself let me use you
To keep away those trying to tear
Us down,
Dear Walls
Don’t stand forever, please tell
Me who to let in?
And who to let you fall upon,,
Only I tear you down.
Only you can break my fall
And Dear confidence
Please come to me in bursts ,
I feel it’s overdue,
And only time will be tell if
Getting better, is
Worse than getting screwed
Dear rebellion
Stop fighting against my better judgement
Be my nothing at all ,
And dear shaken heart
Please don’t let me fall
I cannot take more of this
I can’t quit I’ve come to far
I admit life’s hard
But it never seemed as bleak as this……..
Published 10th Jan 2013
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11th Jan 2013 7:13pm
11th Jan 2013 8:24pm
21st Jan 2013 8:42pm
I like this. I think the ending is a bit shaky (I only say this coz the other segments seemed to leave in a more positive way). The rest is so true and well thought out- few snags here and there with punctuation and/or line breaks:/ this could just be me, everyone's got their own soul and style with which to paint. I really got pulled in though.
happy writings om_nom_noms
happy writings om_nom_noms
