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Dear Agony Poet
He...
writes beautiful poetry
full of meaning
so sensitive and deep
the mails we exchange
pitter-patter on my desert
like the sweetest warmest rain
I'm so sure
we share the same dreams
although he's twice my age
(with three grown up children
from a prior relationship)
and he lives
more than a thousand miles away
He wants me to quit school
go live with him
just the two of us
in a log cabin
high in the mountains
get back to nature
wild and free
He swears he'll stop drinking
and finish the book
he's always known he could write
but he needs me
right there by his side
and somehow I'd feel so guilty
if I didn't go
Is it love
when your mind's on fire
and just the sound of someone's name
makes your heart go
bumpety-bumpety
faster than a crazy train?
Please help
Should I go
or should I stay?
I just don't know
what to do
Published 31st Jul 2010
| Edited 27th Mar 2016
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2010 7:53pm
i say go for it. live in that log cabin with that other man, man.
31st Jul 2010 10:14pm
31st Jul 2010 11:30pm
1st Aug 2010 8:54pm
& unusual style for a poem, love the idea of it. :)
The theme is simply brilliant & I love that you've incorporated so many different emotions through it, for both the reader and the persona.
The theme is simply brilliant & I love that you've incorporated so many different emotions through it, for both the reader and the persona.
Anonymous
15th Dec 2010 6:36pm
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