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My problem with the clouds
A puff of clouds is what I see on a daily basis.
It calms my nerves and it stops the hurt.
When I huff and puff clouds I really do feel as if I'm there with the clouds.
When a cloud comes up my way I huff and I'll puff until I feel a sense of being proud.
At times I feel as if I'm doing something wrong.
The puffy clouds make me forget about that with their fog.
I wish a cloud could cuddle with me so that I wouldn't have to huff and puff until there's nothing left of the cloud..... But so do my doubts.
But it's ok.
I'm used to making clouds go away.
It fills me with no shame.
Hell I'll huff and I'll puff until there's nothing left and I still wouldn't care.
Clouds come and go.
But I guess I've been trying to calm my nerves the wrong way.
I never meant to puff them away.
I just needed what they had and what I had they didn't want.
So I took them and did what I pleased with them until there was nothing left.
It calms my nerves and it stops the hurt.
When I huff and puff clouds I really do feel as if I'm there with the clouds.
When a cloud comes up my way I huff and I'll puff until I feel a sense of being proud.
At times I feel as if I'm doing something wrong.
The puffy clouds make me forget about that with their fog.
I wish a cloud could cuddle with me so that I wouldn't have to huff and puff until there's nothing left of the cloud..... But so do my doubts.
But it's ok.
I'm used to making clouds go away.
It fills me with no shame.
Hell I'll huff and I'll puff until there's nothing left and I still wouldn't care.
Clouds come and go.
But I guess I've been trying to calm my nerves the wrong way.
I never meant to puff them away.
I just needed what they had and what I had they didn't want.
So I took them and did what I pleased with them until there was nothing left.
Published 7th Jan 2013
| Edited 14th Jan 2013
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7th Jan 2013 9:26am
This is really good. Smiling is an awesome thing, if u need to, do so, even if there is no reason:)
7th Jan 2013 9:52am
Anonymous
11th Jan 2013 10:26pm
A lovely poem!
I like the floating feeling you've created with the use of some clever repetition, Bambi.
Small observation, if I may.
*The puffy clouds make me forget about that with there fog
(Maybe ought to be.. ..."with their fog.."
Nonetheless, an enjoyable read.
Thanks for sharing! Keep penning, B :-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
I like the floating feeling you've created with the use of some clever repetition, Bambi.
Small observation, if I may.
*The puffy clouds make me forget about that with there fog
(Maybe ought to be.. ..."with their fog.."
Nonetheless, an enjoyable read.
Thanks for sharing! Keep penning, B :-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
