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ADDICTION
My hands are shaky, my heart is pounding at an astounding beat.
My knees are wobbly, my palms are sweaty, all I had was a tweak!
I'm absent minded! I can't see straight!
This damn craving is controlliong me!
I gotta have! My body needs it! One more hit I'll be complete!
This addiction is taking over me! I FEAR I'M FALLING IN TOO DEEP!
I can't be without it gotta have it before I sleep!
It's in my system, it feels so good a levitation beyond measure.
How can an addiction feel so right? How can it bring me so much pleasure?
I'm feeling weak! It's hard to breath! I need a hit again!
I gottt have it! Can't be without it! my drug of choice...Men! Men! Men!
My knees are wobbly, my palms are sweaty, all I had was a tweak!
I'm absent minded! I can't see straight!
This damn craving is controlliong me!
I gotta have! My body needs it! One more hit I'll be complete!
This addiction is taking over me! I FEAR I'M FALLING IN TOO DEEP!
I can't be without it gotta have it before I sleep!
It's in my system, it feels so good a levitation beyond measure.
How can an addiction feel so right? How can it bring me so much pleasure?
I'm feeling weak! It's hard to breath! I need a hit again!
I gottt have it! Can't be without it! my drug of choice...Men! Men! Men!
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4th Jan 2013 10:21pm
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8th Jan 2013 6:28pm
I like this one. If that photo is really you, I'll be your drug any day!
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8th Jan 2013 9:27pm
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Great write. I was leaning toward meth, although i was confussed on the sleeping part.. you caught me by suprise when you said men.
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9th Jan 2013 3:29pm
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9th Jan 2013 3:57am
I like the surprise ending. I definitely wasn't prepared for you to say men. Very nice.
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9th Jan 2013 3:35pm
LOL! thank you. I think men can be a drug worst than anything out there! They will have you doing things you would not do in your normal state of mind! have you thinking "now why dah hell did i do that?! my opinion
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11th Jan 2013 10:23am
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25th Jan 2013 7:57pm
LOL! I'm not fimiliar with the proper drug terms for "using" but I've heard "tweaking/tweak" used so "tweak" sounded about right for my flow.:)
Yes, men are the ultimate addiction! lol
thank you!
Yes, men are the ultimate addiction! lol
thank you!
Re: ADDICTION
17th Mar 2013 11:53pm
Disturbing but yet sense that one finds relief and serenity.
The cop in me says "crack'ish" and disturbing.
The poet says strangely familiar and understandable.
The cop in me says "crack'ish" and disturbing.
The poet says strangely familiar and understandable.
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18th Mar 2013 00:17am
I sometimes wonder if they're not one in the same... they both drive you crazy... lmao
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18th Mar 2013 00:18am
I sometimes wonder if they're not one in the same... they both drive you crazy... lmao
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18th Mar 2013 00:21am