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Wax Candles Melting In My Mind
I never thought
fucking thoughts
lost in thought
who thought
not me
guilty pleasures
guilty man
guilty conscious
the verdict is guilty
she shall hang for this, again
wanting out
never getting out
looking out
freaking out
locked in my head, a mental prison
wonder if
no wonder
why wonder
boy wonder
if a river is a thought then wonder is a wave
whale of a time
time will tell
matter of time
time bombs
the clock has exploded seconds are splattered on the wall
life of thought
guilty soul
left out
wondering about it all
no time left the clock is dead.
fucking thoughts
lost in thought
who thought
not me
guilty pleasures
guilty man
guilty conscious
the verdict is guilty
she shall hang for this, again
wanting out
never getting out
looking out
freaking out
locked in my head, a mental prison
wonder if
no wonder
why wonder
boy wonder
if a river is a thought then wonder is a wave
whale of a time
time will tell
matter of time
time bombs
the clock has exploded seconds are splattered on the wall
life of thought
guilty soul
left out
wondering about it all
no time left the clock is dead.
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Re: Wax Candles Melting In My Mind
28th Dec 2012 4:17pm
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28th Dec 2012 4:28pm
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28th Dec 2012 4:29pm
yes....eye
love
it.......definitely me fav nikkimoe poom thusFar--
nice riddim & woidplay....
goo'job kid
love
it.......definitely me fav nikkimoe poom thusFar--
nice riddim & woidplay....
goo'job kid
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28th Dec 2012 4:36pm
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Anonymous
28th Dec 2012 4:30pm
Wow cool! I like the different style that lends well to the message of the poem. Awesome, Nikki!
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28th Dec 2012 4:37pm
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28th Dec 2012 5:42pm
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28th Dec 2012 5:43pm
hey Broom how the heck are you!!!!! Happy New Year!!!
and I was just blah I guess when I wrote this :)
and I was just blah I guess when I wrote this :)
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28th Dec 2012 6:06pm
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28th Dec 2012 6:10pm
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28th Dec 2012 5:43pm
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28th Dec 2012 5:44pm
Re: Wax Candles Melting In My Mind
28th Dec 2012 6:55pm
For something you felt blah writing, it's very powerful. It really made me think those thoughts that are unthinkable ;) I love the way the last stanza explains it all. Oh, and kudos on a new style, never read anything like it.
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28th Dec 2012 7:32pm
Re: Wax Candles Melting In My Mind
29th Dec 2012 00:15am
Nikkie...your vastness and haunting clarity
keep me reading every word!
Fire
Love the style of writing you shose here.
keep me reading every word!
Fire
Love the style of writing you shose here.
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29th Dec 2012 00:27am
Re: Wax Candles Melting In My Mind
29th Dec 2012 10:35pm
very clever, very complex, very very simple, this poem is a sweet flower in the shit pile called life, respect to your penned mind vart@rt
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31st Dec 2012 5:02pm