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Lesson in the field
Mothers blue sky.
So deep.
So comforting.
The sweet scent of lavender in the air,
Filling my lungs,
As the tall grass caresses my arms,
Moving at the slow tempo,
Of a sweetly calm song.
Clouds spotting the sky,
Crawling slowly and quietly,
Remind me of those dreams.
Those fleeting dreams.
Dreams that, no matter what you do, you never reach.
Dreams that are always there and visible,
Yet they never stay and you can never recall the details.
Closing my eyes,
Breathing in sweet scent,
I take another lesson,
From the Gods.
So deep.
So comforting.
The sweet scent of lavender in the air,
Filling my lungs,
As the tall grass caresses my arms,
Moving at the slow tempo,
Of a sweetly calm song.
Clouds spotting the sky,
Crawling slowly and quietly,
Remind me of those dreams.
Those fleeting dreams.
Dreams that, no matter what you do, you never reach.
Dreams that are always there and visible,
Yet they never stay and you can never recall the details.
Closing my eyes,
Breathing in sweet scent,
I take another lesson,
From the Gods.
Published 28th Dec 2012
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28th Dec 2012 3:01am
Hey I was just feeling like this perhaps not for the same reasons but I just filled pages of a poor book with words trying to describe it and your words did much better.
31st Dec 2012 00:25am
29th Dec 2012 6:14am
Quite the peaceful, meditative, enlightened piece this is! So true about dreams! And indeed mankind is always learning from the gods. There is always much to learn, and always much to teach! I found this poem to be eloquent, beautiful, spiritual, and simply delightful! I cannot praise it enough. Thanks for sharing this. :)
31st Dec 2012 00:22am
I am both greatly humbled and honoured that a much more skilled writer than I would praise it so. I thank you.
