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26th Dec 2012 00:32am
26th Dec 2012 2:41am
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26th Dec 2012 5:02am
So true, BFF. . .;)
26th Dec 2012 1:53pm
26th Dec 2012 4:23pm
ok Gigi, I'm sorry 'bout doing this all the time. it's decent enough,you know that else you'd not have published.
thing is, I reckon that when a poem is so short, every word has to count and you've got two 'fors and three Christmas-s.
I'm not going to suggest anything 'cos I think you can sort this one out no bother.
it is however very deep. fair play missus :)
thing is, I reckon that when a poem is so short, every word has to count and you've got two 'fors and three Christmas-s.
I'm not going to suggest anything 'cos I think you can sort this one out no bother.
it is however very deep. fair play missus :)
26th Dec 2012 10:48pm
I was to far gone I just posted what I thought. But I am going to fix it up :-) thanks lep
29th Dec 2012 10:34pm
30th Dec 2012 00:11am
