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Working With Work
1.
Then more work, worked
through, tired, weak,
seemingly nearly done,
almost half-finished:
there is a lot to like,
a lot to dislike, a lot
somewhere in the middle.
2.
Like minding a tree, peeling
bark, littering the already
littered ground: wait for
the last final molecule to
be released: what is your/my
life hung together by: a
lockerlined metalclanging
corridor?
3.
Eyes of glitter on the
brink of what? Do you
know what you see? In
ten more minutes will you
be free? Of whom? Why?
Yourself, me, responsibilities?
All those like people rushing,
running, capturing you, like
in the feigned attention or non-
rapture, as you have seen, heard,
constructed, mentally and cosmically
displayed it all before? You know
better than I do: and I do know.
Wood, steel, over emotional motivation,
or smoke hash: gross, green, bitter
lemonpeal coffeegrounds, like wood
wool burning nutcrust walnut skin:
is that all, my dear?
Then more work, worked
through, tired, weak,
seemingly nearly done,
almost half-finished:
there is a lot to like,
a lot to dislike, a lot
somewhere in the middle.
2.
Like minding a tree, peeling
bark, littering the already
littered ground: wait for
the last final molecule to
be released: what is your/my
life hung together by: a
lockerlined metalclanging
corridor?
3.
Eyes of glitter on the
brink of what? Do you
know what you see? In
ten more minutes will you
be free? Of whom? Why?
Yourself, me, responsibilities?
All those like people rushing,
running, capturing you, like
in the feigned attention or non-
rapture, as you have seen, heard,
constructed, mentally and cosmically
displayed it all before? You know
better than I do: and I do know.
Wood, steel, over emotional motivation,
or smoke hash: gross, green, bitter
lemonpeal coffeegrounds, like wood
wool burning nutcrust walnut skin:
is that all, my dear?
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