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sleep deprived
too many midnight jogs,
long nights,
wish i could put my mind on pause,
some say they feel me but i know
they dont,
cuz when they think my hearts beating
fast its beating slow,
lost in my mind, random turns
guessing which way i need to go,
theres nothing here
i can call my own,
this numb feeling never seizes to grow,
long nights,
wish i could put my mind on pause,
some say they feel me but i know
they dont,
cuz when they think my hearts beating
fast its beating slow,
lost in my mind, random turns
guessing which way i need to go,
theres nothing here
i can call my own,
this numb feeling never seizes to grow,
Published 16th Dec 2012
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16th Dec 2012 9:36pm
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nice drop Bro.
would've like to see this expanded a bit
i'm reading the effect but left me inquisitive about the cause
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nice drop Bro.
would've like to see this expanded a bit
i'm reading the effect but left me inquisitive about the cause
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16th Dec 2012 9:56pm
.....you people and your dotss:::::
thanks,
and i just might for you haha i let you know,
but(wow deja vu) i couldnt fit the causes* in a poem
it wouldnt work, lets just say im an over thinker
thanks,
and i just might for you haha i let you know,
but(wow deja vu) i couldnt fit the causes* in a poem
it wouldnt work, lets just say im an over thinker
Anonymous
16th Dec 2012 9:37pm
Feeling slightly lost today?
;)
Nice write, though slightly short :)
;)
Nice write, though slightly short :)
16th Dec 2012 9:58pm
everyday*
thankss:) i have a ton that are a lot shorter,
short poems are good too thooo
thankss:) i have a ton that are a lot shorter,
short poems are good too thooo
16th Dec 2012 10:34pm
yea love short poems...show a sharp mind...and good for these old eyes...nice write!...enough dots for you?
16th Dec 2012 11:13pm
