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To End Almost
Go out and discover
a near perfect world,
perfected by incense,
intensity, by spirit,
meaning: let me know
as you leave so I can
carry your baggage, empty.
Write to me, e-mail me of
what you have found. Tell
me about paradise, your life,
listless life, the void, vacuum,
the uncertainty of every assurance
of a near perfected perfect unexpected
world: what the hell else is there to do?
a near perfect world,
perfected by incense,
intensity, by spirit,
meaning: let me know
as you leave so I can
carry your baggage, empty.
Write to me, e-mail me of
what you have found. Tell
me about paradise, your life,
listless life, the void, vacuum,
the uncertainty of every assurance
of a near perfected perfect unexpected
world: what the hell else is there to do?
Published 13th Dec 2012
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2012 5:52pm
Nearly perfect, yes, when one reaches perfection, what is left then?
(I never want to be perfect, I want to be me)
Nice piece!
(I never want to be perfect, I want to be me)
Nice piece!
14th Dec 2012 4:52pm
Thank you for your comments. I want to be me, too. The poem is about what happens if you don't.
marcella1
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