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when blade hits my skin
When the blade hits my skin this feeling within
Subsidies it no longer rules my mind.
When the blade hits my skin it opens my flesh.
The burn and sting brings me such delight
When the blade hits my skin the anger
I hold starts to vanish I no longer feel the urge
to harm anyone but myself.
When the blade hits my skin the blood starts
to emerg dripping flowing so graceful and
unbroken. The sensation I receive is so
wanted and welcom.
When the blade hits my skin it leavs behind
Its mutilation and disfiguring
reminder of memorys past.
Subsidies it no longer rules my mind.
When the blade hits my skin it opens my flesh.
The burn and sting brings me such delight
When the blade hits my skin the anger
I hold starts to vanish I no longer feel the urge
to harm anyone but myself.
When the blade hits my skin the blood starts
to emerg dripping flowing so graceful and
unbroken. The sensation I receive is so
wanted and welcom.
When the blade hits my skin it leavs behind
Its mutilation and disfiguring
reminder of memorys past.
Published 11th Dec 2012
| Edited 10th Apr 2014
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18th Sep 2013 7:50am
very nice. you may want to go over and put some letters in a couple words you forgot.
30th May 2014 7:45pm
You make cutting sound like an addiction rather than an affliction. Enjoyed it.
15th Jul 2014 6:07am
17th Jul 2016 3:38am
try doe nating blood
the blood loss gives the high
no scsring, clean, public service
the blood loss gives the high
no scsring, clean, public service
14th Oct 2017 10:07pm
I love my scars just like I love my tattoos. I take very good care while doing my cutting
