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A life worth living
sometimes life can seem difficult and in vein
but don’t give up
the only thing that won’t betray you is your efforts
live life
love life
no matter how hard
or painful
it seems at the moment
the time will come eventually
that you will be able to lie on your bed
and think that your day really was worth it
and when that day finally comes the feeling will be so amazing
that will get you hooked for life
a life not in vein anymore but a true life with meaning
a life like that no matter how much
blood, sweat and tears drained from you
will finally give you that smile you where always hoping for
a life that is worthy of you
a life worth living
but don’t give up
the only thing that won’t betray you is your efforts
live life
love life
no matter how hard
or painful
it seems at the moment
the time will come eventually
that you will be able to lie on your bed
and think that your day really was worth it
and when that day finally comes the feeling will be so amazing
that will get you hooked for life
a life not in vein anymore but a true life with meaning
a life like that no matter how much
blood, sweat and tears drained from you
will finally give you that smile you where always hoping for
a life that is worthy of you
a life worth living
Published 7th Dec 2012
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7th Dec 2012 12:33pm
"the only thing that won’t betray you is your efforts"
possibly one of the truest things anyone could say. We are the master of our destiny.
lovely poem
7th Dec 2012 12:51pm
There is no destiny only reaction to actions as blunt as it may sound; in ancient Greece the 3 destinies controlled your life. Merely an excuse to blame someone else for all the wrongs in our lives. We can do whatever we want to, only after we will have to face the consequences of our actions, whatever they might be. Thank you and have a good day ^ ^
9th Dec 2012 8:28pm
10th Dec 2012 10:53pm
:) Thank you so much! I still feel a bit insecure... Mostly because i write in Greek and those are translated, so it's really hard for me to say the exact same things and i feel like they lose alot in the translation... I have a prose that is 1300 words and it is my greatest work... I friend that has written more than 40 books told me if i could write 10 stories like that, he could publish it! I have written 4 so far(since 2008) and i really want to translate it, but it so hard because it's written in Greek argot and the feelings i describe with those words are too damn difficult to be translated as they should be... I wish I could upload Greek poems...
19th Feb 2023 5:24am
Sigh... This is LaKu here. I tried to login to my account, but I dont have access to it. So I created Luvmeh (love me) and since I am now 6 years sober, I started finding outlet in art. I wont copy to the new profile all I have written here so it wont set the mood as it was back then.
So check it out if you like 🙂
So check it out if you like 🙂
