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Will You Love Me Through It All?
"........so badly
I wanna go outside
But everyone knows
that a man ain't supposed to cry
I gotta cry 'cause crying
eases the pain.
People this hurt I feel inside,
words could never explain,
I just wish it would [b]Rain....."[/b]
On my knees, to the heavens
I scream out to God above
With my head thrown back, I await her warm teardrops
to fall like "Rain".....my tenderlove.
Please, precious babygirl,
If you can hear my call
Love me through the adversity
Please, love me through it all.
I pride myself a strong man
But I can't feel that anymore
"That long black cloud is comin' down"
and "now I feel like I'm knockin' on heaven's door."
And again I scream towards heaven
If you can hear my languished call
Love me, please love me through this adversity
Please love me through it all
Before it's over, I long, I need to feel
Your love, your admiration......your gentle kiss
In this final moment, as I wrap my arms around you
I need to feel the flesh of your body pressed against my flesh in a moment just like this.....
And with my very last breath
I need to feel you tenderly make love to me once more
To let me die inside your womb again
Let me feel your gentle rain engulf thee.....
......and guide me to thy peaceful shores.
My brown eyes, slowly they close
Alas, the darkness falls
Love me, please love me into my next lifetime
Please love me, please love me through it all.
Author's Note-( a warm thanks to 2 of my classic favs, to Dylan for "Knockin' On Heaven's Door" and to the Temps for "I Wish It Would Rain")
Written by
MusicallyMrM
(Mr_Mahogany_Wood)
Published 4th Dec 2012
| Edited 5th Dec 2012
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Re: Will You Love Me Through It All?
Anonymous
4th Dec 2012 5:49pm
MrM,
If you haven't already, you NEED to record this one!!! Awesome Write!
tornado
If you haven't already, you NEED to record this one!!! Awesome Write!
tornado
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4th Dec 2012 7:41pm
Thank you Windy-T. Sometimes, even the most enlightened must travel some dark paths.
Re: Will You Love Me Through It All?
4th Dec 2012 6:05pm
Beautifully written. Amazingly worded. It is all together an amazing piece. I love it. Keep up the tremendous work.
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4th Dec 2012 7:43pm
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4th Dec 2012 7:39pm
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4th Dec 2012 7:44pm
Re: Will You Love Me Through It All?
The person who can’t understand your silence, can’t never understand your words. And there is no need to explain love in words. For if you love someone then you love all of them. Not just the good things. Support them and be there for them at their lowest moment. That's Love!
Like the sexy, sensual imagery with this write, LOVE enrapture you into one body, so when you rise...the one you love rise with you. And when you fall, the one you love is there to catch you. :-)
I felt your pen my friend, it was very emotional! A Beautiful heartfelt piece! *I have tears!*
Luv you!
Like the sexy, sensual imagery with this write, LOVE enrapture you into one body, so when you rise...the one you love rise with you. And when you fall, the one you love is there to catch you. :-)
I felt your pen my friend, it was very emotional! A Beautiful heartfelt piece! *I have tears!*
Luv you!
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5th Dec 2012 4:49pm
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5th Dec 2012 3:53pm
If a love is true and righteous it will last forever through many lifetimes and chances are
adversity will make it even stronger. Great write!
adversity will make it even stronger. Great write!
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wouldn't it be a wonderful world if people truly understood the comment you just made. So simply stated.....yet so powerful.
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6th Dec 2012 5:01am
I'd like to add that if I were your "babygirl"
I'd ask you to take my hand and together we would fight any adversity that would come our way. I would always stand by you and defend you and make your enemies see what I see when I look at you. :)
I'd ask you to take my hand and together we would fight any adversity that would come our way. I would always stand by you and defend you and make your enemies see what I see when I look at you. :)
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6th Dec 2012 4:44pm
^^^^well stated scarletvelvet! I love your comment and completely agree. I'd ask the same ....xo
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6th Dec 2012 5:38pm
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And to Scarlet, I wish that you could see the teary smile you just put upon my face : )
Re: Will You Love Me Through It All?
6th Dec 2012 4:10pm
Thank you Mr.M, this write speaks to my heart, deep inside. Like always, I love your writing.
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6th Dec 2012 5:45pm
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7th Dec 2012 7:38am
Your yearning and desperation is palpable here. It sings out like the dying cries in an empty home, seeking company, security, but finding only absence. Lingering and poignant. This is sadly beautiful. A truly great write.
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7th Dec 2012 2:37pm
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1st Jan 2013 6:27pm
This poem moved me with its' cries of wants and needs. It's truly beautiful in a special way that's different from other poems I've read from you. You are such an amazing, consistent talent!
The line below is deep and heartfelt:
To let me die inside your womb again
Great work!
The line below is deep and heartfelt:
To let me die inside your womb again
Great work!
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1st Jan 2013 6:49pm
The flow of verbal consciousness comes easy when speaking from the heart. Many days, I feel like a blues writer who has seen more life than he can forget and my only catharsis comes from these poems.
I feel authentic.....all writers should. : )
I feel authentic.....all writers should. : )
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1st Jan 2013 11:24pm
You are amongst the stars! True,well spoken talent of all sorts. Seriously, it's impressive and breathtaking. I understand what you mean about the place it comes from...the plus is that you are able to do something positive. Having said that, you give others a place to escape and indulge in your literary art. A special talent, you are.:)
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re: Re: Will You Love Me Through It All?
3rd Jan 2013 12:02pm
Thank you Kasupuu. We are all but kindred to each others plight and it is wonderful that words can express mutual, heartfelt feelings : )