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icicle .
blindfold
Sally
drapes
the
eager hand
Rope
wrapping
the shoulder
preparation
is the
family name
of
the diminutive
game
androgenic pelt
dance in delight
on the membrane’s
paved
pores
soft
ankles
frisson
in
wait
moist air
smells
of
a quivering
fate
taped to
lust filled
craving
vanity stricken voice
howls
dark night
as vigour
turns rigour
beg
more
pleasure
for a moment
just prior
in angelic harmony
vocal chords
emanate
a
scream
-x-
Written by
RevolutionAL
(Alistair Plint)
Published 4th Dec 2012
| Edited 19th Jun 2015
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Re: icicle .
Anonymous
4th Dec 2012 2:35pm
Just on a side note, despite having appreciated feet and shoes all my life, I've never thought of ankles as 'perfect'. Just saying.
This is abstract and beautiful. It's everything I would expect to read from you. A thorough dedication. Thank you for sharing.
This is abstract and beautiful. It's everything I would expect to read from you. A thorough dedication. Thank you for sharing.
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re: Re: icicle .
4th Dec 2012 2:42pm
Yeah...maybe 'perfect' is in the eye of the beholder... thank you for the edit.
Thank you for your kind feedback and comment.
smiles*
Thank you for your kind feedback and comment.
smiles*
Re: icicle .
fine little chiller
there, sir Plint.........
icicle ?
per
fect
title.....but
as 'subjective' as ankles,
(of course)
there, sir Plint.........
icicle ?
per
fect
title.....but
as 'subjective' as ankles,
(of course)
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re: Re: icicle .
5th Dec 2012 5:59am
of course... Dan man,
or as subjective as pours
and
pores
Thank you for your help
kozac-i
Al.
or as subjective as pours
and
pores
Thank you for your help
kozac-i
Al.
Re: icicle .
4th Dec 2012 4:50pm
re: Re: icicle .
5th Dec 2012 6:02am
glad it did the HOT thing for you...
Yes, the title is definately part of the work... and [she] would hopefully be pleased it is included.
thank you for your feedback.
Al
Yes, the title is definately part of the work... and [she] would hopefully be pleased it is included.
thank you for your feedback.
Al
Re: icicle .
4th Dec 2012 6:46pm
re: Re: icicle .
Oh Doc,
great insight in that comment there.
Appreciate the visit and feedback.
Al
great insight in that comment there.
Appreciate the visit and feedback.
Al
re: Re: icicle .
well, well look at that...your name also starts with R!
glad it sparks intrest for you, sis.
;]
Al's Bells
p.s. thank you much for the list!
Re: icicle .
Anonymous
5th Dec 2012 10:04am
"moist air smells of a quivering fate"enjoyed!
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re: Re: icicle .
5th Dec 2012 11:37am
Re: icicle .
5th Dec 2012 7:18pm
Very much enjoyed! I'd say the opposite of icicle :) thanks for sharing Mister Plint.
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re: Re: icicle .
11th Dec 2012 11:22am
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14th Jun 2018 9:37pm
Re: icicle .
14th Jun 2018 9:37pm