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You leave nothing untouched
every cell in my body longs for you
as you produce lakes and oceans of tears
streams and unending rivers of lust
puddles upon puddles of cum
orgasms as intense as the explosion of stars
indescribable bliss and happiness
searing jealousy and the stinging pain of heartache
endless worry about your well being
inspiration that rivals the blossoming of flowers
utmost admiration and awe for all your talent
out of this world love bigger than the cosmos itself
yes it is you and you alone who leaves
nothing about me untouched
as you produce lakes and oceans of tears
streams and unending rivers of lust
puddles upon puddles of cum
orgasms as intense as the explosion of stars
indescribable bliss and happiness
searing jealousy and the stinging pain of heartache
endless worry about your well being
inspiration that rivals the blossoming of flowers
utmost admiration and awe for all your talent
out of this world love bigger than the cosmos itself
yes it is you and you alone who leaves
nothing about me untouched
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3rd Dec 2012 1:42pm
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re: Re: You leave nothing untouched
4th Dec 2012 3:29pm
Thank you very much Luis. It seems it's been a while since I've seen you here on the DUP and if that's true welcome back and please stay around because I remember really enjoying your poetry.
:)
:)
re: Re: You leave nothing untouched
11th Dec 2012 4:11pm
Thank you Spinoza. I am delighted that you found such joy in my poem and your comment is right on with everything that you say, and if it wants to make you remove your wellies, think of me while you do it .... ;)
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21st Dec 2012 7:53pm
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Anonymous
28th Dec 2012 7:31am
very good, enjoyed!
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29th Dec 2012 6:51am
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25th Apr 2013 5:53am
It had naughty n it had alot of love, nice combination lol
ending was very beautiful :)
ending was very beautiful :)
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re: Re: You leave nothing untouched
25th Apr 2013 6:35am
Thank you -- naughty and lots of love is always a beautiful combination in my book.....
I appreciate you commenting... :)
I appreciate you commenting... :)