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inadequate me
I lay here
And incessantly ponder
Your desires.
To be unfit
As I am
Is to be
Without you.
For what you
Crave
Lust
And
Long for
Is not me.
I am inadequate.
Insufficient
Unsuitable
And
Inappropriate.
To be me
Is
Estar sin ti.
To be without you.
And incessantly ponder
Your desires.
To be unfit
As I am
Is to be
Without you.
For what you
Crave
Lust
And
Long for
Is not me.
I am inadequate.
Insufficient
Unsuitable
And
Inappropriate.
To be me
Is
Estar sin ti.
To be without you.
Published 29th Nov 2012
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29th Nov 2012 6:08pm
I found this to be quite thought provoking. Beautiful choice of words and I love the flow of it. The ending is quite spectacular as well. Well done!
Xoxox
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29th Nov 2012 10:06pm
14th Mar 2013 6:20am
lovely! you have some real talent!
guess writing since age 7 brings that out in ppl. :P
guess writing since age 7 brings that out in ppl. :P
