was there

Open book here lightbaron

strider

Promising to hear
thank you strider

Interesting. Well written.

Kind of you to say so
thank you scribbler

lightbaron

oh!what a piece I could totally relate to..struck a clean chord I should say. yeah, this art of words..a flexing out sometimes or most times, like fillers in b/w those high-fives.
I donn want to add to the essence as this is a lucid pearl, but would highlight these alone
"things  
transcend  
   or  
 whatever the word is  
when I need art to mean something"
..every true artist feels this magic of how his/ her work gets blooms to perfection , sometimes very unexpected..in a splitsecond or travelling a mystical route..

great piece & thanxx fr this share, would like a list:)

Very glad to hear that Uma.
Had the wanna write, sorta have to write, but don't know what to write thing going.
Hard piece to stand behind (self consciousness and all)..but felt so right at the time, hence "was there".
Been throwing around the word "sincerity",so figured I should know what I meant by it.
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting my friend

"Other times,  
like now  
   
I have to rely on sincerity  
   
to make these words I write    
convince you  
that I felt something        
   
worth  
writing about."

I can identify with this part because I do the same a lot. Sometimes you just need to get to the basic emotion rather than dressing up what you feel with fine phrases to get the point across. Great work.

Thank ya kindly drifting
It really is just the basics, no dressing up.
Has to have integrity to exist. Hard as hell to keep the confidence in this piece, and your words help a good deal. Thanks again

A poem for poets, I like it! Sums up that feeling of frustration or anxiety when you write something just for the sake of writing :)

Howdy there dystopian, a pleasure.
Glad to see your words, thank ya much