Incomplete

Ah this is beautiful....girl.
So nice to see you back!


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Thank you so much my sister! It is nice to be back.

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A beautiful heartfelt write Gypsy. Good to see you back posting lovely lady.

Thank you, thank you I am glad you like this piece Magda your opinion is important and always welcome.

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Incomplete? More a dollop of whipped cream to go atop your decadent dessert :)

Whipped cream hmmm..... where do you want it? hahaha Thanks Ken love the comment. ;P

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The start of this reminds me of Sting's "Epilogue (Nothing 'Bout Me)". Then it turns into a plea, much like Queen's "Somebody To Love".

As with your other writes, this is moving.

Thanks Jazz, I appreciate insightful comment.

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I truly feel you here in this beautiful and sincere piece!
Lovely words you have spilled from the heart!!!

Thanks Ms. Milky i am so thrilled you liked this piece.

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Can definitely relate to your words Red.

Well done...Strider

Thank you ol boy I am glad this was relatable piece.

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Flowing and poignant ...

Hiya Mark thank you so much for stopping by to read my piece!

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Gabriel, bello! How I have missed your great comments, thank you I am so happy you like my piece!

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Very nicely written piece from the heart.  Moving with honest yearning --something that is hard to do without sounding trite. Well done. A poignant read. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Thank you very much Mr. J I am pleased with the turn out, I appreciate your comment.

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Thank you

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