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Free from the page...
Close your eyes
and deeply breath,
see with your heart
if your eyes don't believe...
You are not as trapped
as it seems,
only captured on paper
for your readers to set free.
Fore when they read you,
your words teleport to their imagination,
were they carry you
to new places and new stations.
So can you see?
You are not trapped,
it only seems that way,
when you look back...
Gypsy Red
and deeply breath,
see with your heart
if your eyes don't believe...
You are not as trapped
as it seems,
only captured on paper
for your readers to set free.
Fore when they read you,
your words teleport to their imagination,
were they carry you
to new places and new stations.
So can you see?
You are not trapped,
it only seems that way,
when you look back...
Gypsy Red
Published 19th Nov 2012
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19th Nov 2012 10:17pm
fantastic work the words escape from the page and set you free.
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
20th Nov 2012 00:09am
Hey Z!!Its so nice to see you guys I have been away but I am back now, thanks for the fabulous comment yes we just need to see how far our words can go.
Red
Red
19th Nov 2012 10:29pm
20th Nov 2012 00:09am
19th Nov 2012 10:32pm
"Trapped" Such a suffocating word for me, makes me shudder.
A wonderful write Gypsy dear.
A wonderful write Gypsy dear.
20th Nov 2012 00:10am
Thank you my dearest, yes being trapped is never something I wish on anyone.
Red
Red
19th Nov 2012 10:49pm
20th Nov 2012 00:11am
Big huggs and sloppy wet kisses nature boy, glad to be back thanks for reading my piece.
Red
Red
Anonymous
20th Nov 2012 9:03am
Like the concept Red.
Nice poem.
Strider
Nice poem.
Strider
20th Nov 2012 11:27am
I do too Strider because too many of us feel confined to our little bubble world and don't realize our words travel far.Thanks for the comment.
Red
Red
20th Nov 2012 9:50am
20th Nov 2012 11:29am
Thank you Harlequin this piece was a little different but I am happy it is being well received, yes I am glad to be home.
Red
Red
This speaks to where I often feel I am. Trapped. Yet freed a bit by writing. Especially when that writing is read by others. Thank you for this.
20th Nov 2012 7:06pm
Yes sir, you are most welcome and thank you for reading and commenting.
Red
Red
20th Nov 2012 6:04pm
I feel this way often and the pen and page usually free me but not lately but you dear lady gave me peace with your poem ty..Crim :)
20th Nov 2012 7:07pm
Well I am glad this piece does something for you sweet Crim. Thanks for the comment, chin up and smile.;)
Red
Red
