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This feeling in my core

This feeling that is swimming inside me,
it is getting the best of me.
I've had this feeling for a short time,
but it feels like a long time.
The way you talk, bringing you down,
i wish you would stop, it's bringing me down.
It's strange, this feeling, its flowing through my body,
i love this feeling, i want it to continue it's course through my body.
Can i make it, can i have it, can i take you?
I'll keep you, save you, and love you.
Written by Phatman1632
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