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Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
This fascist game of subordinate and master is getting kind of old
Simple minded propaganda and always doing what you're told
Socialmedia has brainwashed you into believing one ways right
When in reality the reason is to cripple you and hinder all your sight
Get the fucking shit out of your eyes and retaliate against the masses
Society is corrupt but you don't have watch helplessly as it all crashes
Revolution is upon us if you would just get your head out of your ass
The world we know is rotting and civilization simply just won't last
It's not fucking difficult to see the faults of a broken nation
When every state is attempting to secede because of peoples procrastination
Dictatorship is preceding as you sit at home and bitch all day
Act on what you peach 'cause communists won't delay
This facade of security is obviously an efficient fucking trap
Because the government rapes it's people as they smile and thrive in crap
Fucking acquisition against a questionably neanderthal country
Willingly surrendering it's birth given rights with promise of hostility
Every fucking one of us is now reprehensible for the destruction of the world
There's a reason we are hated and for all the ignorance we'll soon be scorned
World war three the approaches soon and we are target number one
They're sick of all our shit for all the wretched crime we have done
Honestly we might deserve it 'cause a disease is what we've become
Just turbulent nonsense reaping havoc is what we're from
It's not to late to change if you can walk away from your iphone now and then
Stop conforming into puppets and perceive the predicament that your in
Mindless fucking sheep are hearded by self righteous manipulators
Rise to the occasion 'cause there are no goddamn saviors
Simple minded propaganda and always doing what you're told
Socialmedia has brainwashed you into believing one ways right
When in reality the reason is to cripple you and hinder all your sight
Get the fucking shit out of your eyes and retaliate against the masses
Society is corrupt but you don't have watch helplessly as it all crashes
Revolution is upon us if you would just get your head out of your ass
The world we know is rotting and civilization simply just won't last
It's not fucking difficult to see the faults of a broken nation
When every state is attempting to secede because of peoples procrastination
Dictatorship is preceding as you sit at home and bitch all day
Act on what you peach 'cause communists won't delay
This facade of security is obviously an efficient fucking trap
Because the government rapes it's people as they smile and thrive in crap
Fucking acquisition against a questionably neanderthal country
Willingly surrendering it's birth given rights with promise of hostility
Every fucking one of us is now reprehensible for the destruction of the world
There's a reason we are hated and for all the ignorance we'll soon be scorned
World war three the approaches soon and we are target number one
They're sick of all our shit for all the wretched crime we have done
Honestly we might deserve it 'cause a disease is what we've become
Just turbulent nonsense reaping havoc is what we're from
It's not to late to change if you can walk away from your iphone now and then
Stop conforming into puppets and perceive the predicament that your in
Mindless fucking sheep are hearded by self righteous manipulators
Rise to the occasion 'cause there are no goddamn saviors
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Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
Anonymous
15th Nov 2012 12:01pm
Yep, agreed.
Strider
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15th Nov 2012 12:09pm
Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
15th Nov 2012 12:17pm
Fucking, fuck yes! This piece shows your intelligence and hate for a society of weak frightened people. No doubt we have asked for it, or let it happen in our blind stupid acquiescence, there is still time, but no time to dwell on the weak sheep!
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Somehow I got the feeling you would be one of few to appreciate this. Thanks for the complement, and yes the time to dwell ended as soon as Bush was elected. Look were the fuck we are now, on the verge of becoming a communist country and a fucking president that wants to destroy everything we are. Change, yes we need change, but we're receiving the wrong kind of change.
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15th Nov 2012 12:26pm
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15th Nov 2012 12:29pm
Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
15th Nov 2012 12:31pm
He is just a point of observation, and a puppet. Something placed there to absorb the futile cries of a nation on the brink of an economic and military crash! I actually got excited reading it, cause its right up my alley.
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True, but there's rumor he's apart of the iluminati (i don't have a clue how that's spelled but I'm sure you know what I'm referring to). Could be a conspiracy theory, could not be. The facts they present are very thought provoking though.
Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
15th Nov 2012 1:22pm
There is a great song by the metal rock group OTEP that mirrors what you are saying. It is called "Smash the Control Machine" and it is my "anthem", along with their song "Confrontation".
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re: Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
15th Nov 2012 1:45pm
I think this is my favorite comment I've ever had the honor of receiving. To be compared to Otep.. The woman of my dreams ;) I met her a few months ago on the tour she hosted. It's also like "rise, rebel, resist" in that sense.
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15th Nov 2012 2:48pm
another great tune (as if she has a bad one). and you are welcome. I have a few of Otep's books of poetry (found on Lulu.com) and she is amazing. I would love to see her in concert.
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Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
15th Nov 2012 5:58pm
Hey Sixxx, I love this! I shall return when I have time to offer a solid critique for you.
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re: Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
15th Nov 2012 11:24pm
So glad you like it :)
And cant wait, actual critique is hard to come by.
And cant wait, actual critique is hard to come by.
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17th Nov 2012 1:04am
Alright, I'm back. I just loved this, Sixxx. There's really not much critique to give (other than check your spelling and contractions.) It's a very straight forward poem, which I like. More importantly, it is truthful. It expresses your view (which I agree with for the most part.) Thanks for the read, Sixxx.
Gemini
Gemini
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Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
16th Nov 2012 00:57am
I
LOVE
This
Holy shit, this is so awesome!! I really like the way you see things, and I'm glad to know there are others out there that feel as I do:]
LOVE
This
Holy shit, this is so awesome!! I really like the way you see things, and I'm glad to know there are others out there that feel as I do:]
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re: Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
16th Nov 2012 1:00am
That's great :)
I'm glad you like this. There is always someone out there that feels the same, most people are just to timid to admit it outwardly. You just have to find your voice and stand up for what you believe in.
I'm glad you like this. There is always someone out there that feels the same, most people are just to timid to admit it outwardly. You just have to find your voice and stand up for what you believe in.
Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
16th Nov 2012 12:11pm
After a week in the northeast after Storm Sandy hit...seeing tens of thousands living in tents and worse, it is a crime against we citizens to realize how much tax money this government GIVES to other countries, wastes on stupid ideas and worst of all...how much our federal officials from legislators to judges get just for "serving" us.
In the end, doesn't matter what "party" is in office...we will get screwed.
You have found your voice in writing....strong and clear!
In the end, doesn't matter what "party" is in office...we will get screwed.
You have found your voice in writing....strong and clear!
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16th Nov 2012 10:54pm
Thank you for such an insightful comment Ken, I'm glad to metaphorically hear the passion behind it.
And yes, any party in office is a downfall, but I believe if the nation wasn't so divided (proved by the neck to neck election we just had) the people of our county could come together and discuss how we could better it ourselves, we just might be able to make changes we actually need as opposed to going well over bankrupt, and providing supplies for pointless wars and countries who want nothing more than to destroy us.
And yes, any party in office is a downfall, but I believe if the nation wasn't so divided (proved by the neck to neck election we just had) the people of our county could come together and discuss how we could better it ourselves, we just might be able to make changes we actually need as opposed to going well over bankrupt, and providing supplies for pointless wars and countries who want nothing more than to destroy us.
Re: Raped by Comparison (Blinded America)
17th Nov 2012 1:11am
Amazing write you are preaching to the choir hear thank you for the awesome outlet maybe someone else will open their eyes!
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17th Nov 2012 3:09am