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Depro-Maniac
It gets closer
everyday
I can taste it
suffer it
in my
feet
Hell
I feel it
in my scrotum
like a
plastic
cock
in the arse
As time draws
nearer
I see
the bizarre
in her
crushing me
crushing me again
and again
This Is Good
It’d be best to die
a man
made
man
[.]
Published 12th Nov 2012
| Edited 3rd May 2018
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12th Nov 2012 2:00pm
13th Nov 2012 5:14am
you sir, are an eXtraordinary readerer/comentatorer
with two words of special meaning.
you explain the work.
eXceptionAl comment DeneXtremety.
Thank you
Al.
with two words of special meaning.
you explain the work.
eXceptionAl comment DeneXtremety.
Thank you
Al.
ye
is
tookind re: my
eXtra
oooooOrdinality-
'it' has been said, thru ostrasizative
behaviors :
"he's just a bum...."...(bumbum biddleyum'bum)
"...in thee street wit a fckn saXOfone."
a[much] mut
u a l
'preciation indeed m'friend /
is
tookind re: my
eXtra
oooooOrdinality-
'it' has been said, thru ostrasizative
behaviors :
"he's just a bum...."...(bumbum biddleyum'bum)
"...in thee street wit a fckn saXOfone."
a[much] mut
u a l
'preciation indeed m'friend /
Al,
all justice done here I feel...you adding to this category! the last stanza proves that beyond doubt! a painful read & makes me feel strongly about the perceptions that make our lives, can that for good change the happenings?
many stars I would add here..the clever part of referring time as "her", "this is good"..like a persevering human tone, & a power-packed S2!
u just rock here Al!!
Uma.x
all justice done here I feel...you adding to this category! the last stanza proves that beyond doubt! a painful read & makes me feel strongly about the perceptions that make our lives, can that for good change the happenings?
many stars I would add here..the clever part of referring time as "her", "this is good"..like a persevering human tone, & a power-packed S2!
u just rock here Al!!
Uma.x
13th Nov 2012 5:18am
Why Uma, you'll have me blushing again. You truly are a magnificent breath of fresh air. Thank you for the very kind words.
Blue Skies at you
Al-x-
Blue Skies at you
Al-x-
