Scuttle

Great piece Atakti. Quite an intriguing picture, good luck with the comp. :)

Thank you, Magdalena, let's see if I hit any nerves, lol.

Well done Ataki....Good Luck.

Strider :)

Thank you, Strider, you're too kind.

Very skillfully crafted :)

Oh, thanks, Scribbler, much appreciated. :)

This is a crisp and eerie poem. I liked it very much because it relies on suggestion rather than overt cliche. The structure of short lines, couplets and inner rhythms is a bit late period Sylvia Plath. Thanks for the read.

I'm very flattered that my work is mentioned in the same breath as Plath.

I know who she is, but never read her... Don't hit me! It's on my list of must-reads..

Thanks very much for that comment, Jack. You made my day.

X'lent piece...
puts in
in mind of
Mina Loy......

check'er out &

write on&on

Thanks very much, Daniel, for your comment. I will look up her work.