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Sweet Sanity
11-5-12
Sweet Sanity
I’m at an all time low,
Nothing in this world makes sense anymore
Cannot bear this burden any longer,
It’s much worse than before
Nothing can save me,
This darkness has enslaved me
No more shall I try to resist,
Sit back, relax, allowing insidious acts to persist
Blackened poison courses through my heart and veins,
Demolishing and Dissolving all of my insides away
Scattered blood falls around like summer rain
Surrender to the tempting sensuous pain
As it sweeps me up off my feet,
And carries me to my final resting place
Here I shall stay, forever in the shadows of my grave
Freedom here I've found, mind at ease...
Sanity I've finally found…
Published 6th Nov 2012
| Edited 30th Nov 2015
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6th Nov 2012 4:12pm
I really liked this poem because it drew me in, and it's words gave me shivers and chills. Your dark diction was like a breath of fresh air, and it gave me a clear picture in my mind. I love the topic itself too. Like what if being "sane" makes you worse? Maybe we should all just embrace the insanity of this life. But anyways I really loved it!
7th Nov 2012 12:45pm
