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Thinking A Head
Zipppp, I set him free
I smile then kneel where he can see
The tip of my tongue meeting him ready
I lick my lips staying steady
In one motion my mouth sucks him whole
I flatten my tongue on his pole
A little hand to ball motion
Lets me taste his homemade lotion
Around and around his shaft I spin
He's my Popsicle made of skin
Horizontal I slide across the tip
I'm eager now for a salty sweet sip
I stare up with my mouthful of him
He grabs my hair as he's on the brim
I open wide as he thrusts
Prepared to swallow as he busts
I smile then kneel where he can see
The tip of my tongue meeting him ready
I lick my lips staying steady
In one motion my mouth sucks him whole
I flatten my tongue on his pole
A little hand to ball motion
Lets me taste his homemade lotion
Around and around his shaft I spin
He's my Popsicle made of skin
Horizontal I slide across the tip
I'm eager now for a salty sweet sip
I stare up with my mouthful of him
He grabs my hair as he's on the brim
I open wide as he thrusts
Prepared to swallow as he busts
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Re: Thinking A Head
Anonymous
6th Nov 2012 6:11am
Wait, we are talking about a BJ here, yeah? :) Wooo! Super hot! eJoyed! LOL
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6th Nov 2012 4:07pm
Re: Thinking A Head
Anonymous
6th Nov 2012 6:14am
"Popsicle made of skin haha"! Witty write my dear and of course sexy.
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6th Nov 2012 4:07pm
Re: Thinking A Head
Anonymous
6th Nov 2012 2:54pm
socialbutterfly,
I love the way you think....a head ; ) and that 'one motion' move of yours!
tornado
I love the way you think....a head ; ) and that 'one motion' move of yours!
tornado
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re: Re: Thinking A Head
6th Nov 2012 4:15pm
Yes sometimes thinking hard a head can blow you away!
Your comment is always enjoyed! Thanks
Your comment is always enjoyed! Thanks
Re: Thinking A Head
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Nov 2012 9:58pm
7th Nov 2012 9:55pm
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re: Re: Thinking A Head
10th Nov 2012 8:03pm
Well what can I say I like to heat things up! Thanks for the sexy comment :)
Re: Thinking A Head
19th Nov 2012 3:56am
I like the first line "zipp I set him free" makes me think of a caged animal....which a majority of them are :) very fun, hot read!
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re: Re: Thinking A Head
19th Nov 2012 7:49am
Re: Thinking A Head
10th Dec 2012 11:47pm
This just turned me on even though I'm a girl. It just reminds me of what I do to my man.
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re: Re: Thinking A Head
11th Dec 2012 3:30am
Makes perfect sense to me :) thanks for reading and for the sexy comment!
Re: Thinking A Head
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2012 6:06am
Ahhh I gotta stop reading all of your poems before I bust myself!
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23rd Dec 2012 7:32pm