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long for your touch
My little bed feels big
When you are not here
How little space I need
When you are so near
You hold me in your arms
And breathe on my neck
Your hardness on my back
Makes me very wet
Waiting for the moment
You whisper ‘turn around’
I look into your eyes
Oh my heart does pound
Hurry up my love
And please soon be well
I long for your touch
Your taste and your smell
When you are not here
How little space I need
When you are so near
You hold me in your arms
And breathe on my neck
Your hardness on my back
Makes me very wet
Waiting for the moment
You whisper ‘turn around’
I look into your eyes
Oh my heart does pound
Hurry up my love
And please soon be well
I long for your touch
Your taste and your smell
Published 31st Oct 2012
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1st Nov 2012 00:50am
Quite a great little piece but you can do more I believe..beautiful last lines..keep reading other poets poems as well as writting as you do,you've got great potential.Kev
1st Nov 2012 7:27am
Thank you for the feedback. I will try and read more. I am mainly inspired by my own feelings and thoughts..but am a great lover of reading too..mainly classic novels and surprisingly not poetry.
I have still to find a favorite poet.
I have still to find a favorite poet.
1st Nov 2012 6:49am
Make a loving get-well verse between sickness or injury separated couples.
1st Nov 2012 11:54am
There ain't no expert in writting Geminisb and if one thought of them possessing such a talent then they over-rating themselves we have perfect powerful images and messages within out minds and hearts to put it down in ink it's more complicated than it seems but practice makes perfection.
1st Nov 2012 1:45pm
i don't feel as though this is one of my best..I just wrote it for someone as I felt in just a few minutes. My problem is I don't have the patience to play around with the poems. I just write what I feel and I am done!
