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Autumn Nights
I want us to be naked
snuggled by the fire
on a cool Autumn night.
I want to sense the warmth
of your body
our hearts beating in sync.
I want to feel your head
resting upon my chest
your thigh draped over mine.
I want our spirits
to make love
whilst our bodies rest entwined.
snuggled by the fire
on a cool Autumn night.
I want to sense the warmth
of your body
our hearts beating in sync.
I want to feel your head
resting upon my chest
your thigh draped over mine.
I want our spirits
to make love
whilst our bodies rest entwined.
Published 28th Oct 2012
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29th Oct 2012 00:23am
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2012 2:32am
"I want our spirits
to make love
whilst our bodies rest entwined."
very pretty piece :)
to make love
whilst our bodies rest entwined."
very pretty piece :)
29th Oct 2012 3:04am
29th Oct 2012 4:23am
1st Nov 2012 11:03am
2nd Nov 2012 7:52am
13th Nov 2012 4:11pm
All of my romantic sensibilities swoon.
"I want our spirits
to make love
whilst our bodies rest entwined."
My favorite part. :)
"I want our spirits
to make love
whilst our bodies rest entwined."
My favorite part. :)
14th Nov 2012 1:06am
Mine too! Well damn, you're just commenting on all my poems for Brandy today, aren't you? I love it. Thank you my sweet angel.
Gemini
Gemini
24th Nov 2012 5:52am
Yes those 3 lines get me every time *sigh* not to mention the word "whilst"!!!
How was I not supposed to fall after that?! I didn't stand a chance!
How was I not supposed to fall after that?! I didn't stand a chance!
24th Nov 2012 11:37pm
Whilst I'm happy you like the poem, I'm happier that you didn't stand a chance...and neither did I.
Gemini/Chicago
Gemini/Chicago
20th Jan 2014 00:17am
20th Jan 2014 5:16pm
That's true. But Pansexuality refers to those who are sexually attracted due to an emotional connection regardless of gender. For us hetero folks, that isn't the case. Now what that has to do with this poem, I haven't a clue.
Gemini
Gemini
