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Ive Been There
Blood spilled, tears dropped, yells muffled....
Ive been there....
Dreams shattered, heartbroken, soul aching....
Ive been there....
Broken needles, empty bags, dried up cotton....
Ive been there....
Hot flashes, cold chills, drenched sweats, sleepless nights....
Ive been there....
Endless seizures, five week comas, continual drama....
Ive been there....
Choked by the Devil, Embaced by God, yes....
Ive been there....
Metamorphisized, Manifested, and Evolved....
Im still here....
Published 25th Oct 2012
| Edited 27th Oct 2012
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26th Oct 2012 7:54am
A demonic penetration
feeds the ultimate relaxation!
Shhhhh you hear that? "They're coming!"
Oh you lost and disturbed child of darkness
they already came!
And here you sit,
disturbingly comfortable...
Caged in self imprisonment.
Another scar
another search for the next fix.
The rest can wait
Was that the baby?
yes baby girl.. i've been there.. hello there you. nice to meet you. welclome to DU. you'll love it here. if you eva need anything i'm around. your raw honesty and expression will take you along way..
feeds the ultimate relaxation!
Shhhhh you hear that? "They're coming!"
Oh you lost and disturbed child of darkness
they already came!
And here you sit,
disturbingly comfortable...
Caged in self imprisonment.
Another scar
another search for the next fix.
The rest can wait
Was that the baby?
yes baby girl.. i've been there.. hello there you. nice to meet you. welclome to DU. you'll love it here. if you eva need anything i'm around. your raw honesty and expression will take you along way..
26th Oct 2012 5:35pm
Devilish, that was wonderfully paranoid. That first section. Not a bad thing, loved the way you wrote that. :)
26th Oct 2012 5:30pm
Well that felt like a personal hell to me, can only wonder how bad it felt to write it. Or maybe it felt good.
"choked by the Devil, embraced by God."
Like a tug a war going on.
thanks for sharing.
"choked by the Devil, embraced by God."
Like a tug a war going on.
thanks for sharing.
27th Oct 2012 3:52am
I feel this poem to my core..I was a heroin addict for many years and still miss it today..love this poem!!! I can completely relate..peace Crim
28th Oct 2012 11:36pm
29th Oct 2012 00:22am
Your comment is greatly appreciated Aria07... Twas quite the power experience....
2nd Jan 2014 10:43am
Words from the real! Much respect to those with certain life experiences that others could just never understand.
