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Re: Desnudo
24th Oct 2012 10:06pm
Re: Desnudo
24th Oct 2012 10:09pm
Naked
Naked in the night
the two
learn the language of each other
to understand the difference
Naked in the night
the two
learn the language of each other
to understand the difference
re: Re: Desnudo
8th Dec 2012 2:03am
"to understand the difference'
That's quite a finisher and not at all
what i expected.
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8th Dec 2012 4:52am
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Re: Desnudo
25th Oct 2012 6:30am
Thanks for translation. Reads even more beautifully - "the two learn the language of each other" - my idea of good honeymoon sex.
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Re: Desnudo
Anonymous
18th Dec 2012 8:10pm
Short and to the point, enjoyed
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re: Re: Desnudo
18th Dec 2012 8:21pm