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Yesterday's Sex
The way you had me pinned against the floor
Left my backside submissively sore
I can hardly stretch my legs now
Spent long up on shoulders savoring your plow
Your meticulous mouth delivered bites the best
Residual tenderness presently cloaks my breasts
These stealthy arms of mine ache appeased
From the feral hold I had riding 'til I pleased
My lips and gem remain puckered with heat
That delicious friction brought them there defeat
Pulling my hair when you were near
Stamped a memory crystal clear
The dulcet painful stings I feel
Arise wet scenes that still cling real
I can't stop the smirk that comes to my face
When I sigh from being sore in every place
I'm possessed with yesterday's sex today
Delicious exquisite feeling please.. stay.
Left my backside submissively sore
I can hardly stretch my legs now
Spent long up on shoulders savoring your plow
Your meticulous mouth delivered bites the best
Residual tenderness presently cloaks my breasts
These stealthy arms of mine ache appeased
From the feral hold I had riding 'til I pleased
My lips and gem remain puckered with heat
That delicious friction brought them there defeat
Pulling my hair when you were near
Stamped a memory crystal clear
The dulcet painful stings I feel
Arise wet scenes that still cling real
I can't stop the smirk that comes to my face
When I sigh from being sore in every place
I'm possessed with yesterday's sex today
Delicious exquisite feeling please.. stay.
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Re: Yesterday's Sex
20th Oct 2012 6:43pm
Oh, the aching memory of a good time had. :-)
My fav lines:
Residual tenderness presently cloaks my breasts
These stealthy arms of mine ache appeased
From the feral hold I had riding 'til I pleased
Love your poem, very well written.
I enjoyed immensely!
My fav lines:
Residual tenderness presently cloaks my breasts
These stealthy arms of mine ache appeased
From the feral hold I had riding 'til I pleased
Love your poem, very well written.
I enjoyed immensely!
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re: Re: Yesterday's Sex
21st Oct 2012 00:01am
Re: Yesterday's Sex
Anonymous
20th Oct 2012 7:04pm
You described this feeling perfectly well done fav line " I can't stop the smirk that comes to my face When I sigh from being sore in every place"..so sly!
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re: Re: Yesterday's Sex
21st Oct 2012 00:02am
If you could only see the smirk I have on now...hehe
Thanks for the comment!
Thanks for the comment!
Re: Yesterday's Sex
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2012 00:39am
20th Oct 2012 7:23pm
Many good lines here. Many similarities too. It's the best kinda sore though right? Lol
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re: Re: Yesterday's Sex
21st Oct 2012 00:03am
Re: Yesterday's Sex
20th Oct 2012 7:50pm
socialbutterfly,
I loved this for the content...
"The way you had me pinned against the floor
Left my backside submissively sore"
...and I loved this for the poetic genius.
"The dulcet painful stings I feel
Arise wet scenes that still cling real"
Thank you for the read, cutie.
Holly
I loved this for the content...
"The way you had me pinned against the floor
Left my backside submissively sore"
...and I loved this for the poetic genius.
"The dulcet painful stings I feel
Arise wet scenes that still cling real"
Thank you for the read, cutie.
Holly
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re: Re: Yesterday's Sex
21st Oct 2012 00:04am
Re: Yesterday's Sex
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Oct 2012 9:17pm
20th Oct 2012 9:16pm
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re: Re: Yesterday's Sex
21st Oct 2012 00:06am
Sore and soaring now! Thanks for the great comment, I hope to keep fluttering higher!
Re: Yesterday's Sex
20th Oct 2012 11:54pm
Morning-after feelings in a different, literal sense of the phrase. Could be alternatively titled "Passion's Pains".
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re: Re: Yesterday's Sex
21st Oct 2012 00:07am
Re: Yesterday's Sex
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2012 5:19pm
socialbutterfly
Yes, that smirk on your face...Priceless! Thank you for keeping my mind possessed entirely in this one ; )
tornado
Yes, that smirk on your face...Priceless! Thank you for keeping my mind possessed entirely in this one ; )
tornado
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27th Oct 2012 6:55am
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5th Nov 2012 7:41pm
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6th Nov 2012 5:28am
Re: Yesterday's Sex
Anonymous
14th Nov 2012 5:37am
you described VERY WELL the after math of yesterdays INCREDIBLE sex ;)
it is sooooooo worth it!!!
Great Write
it is sooooooo worth it!!!
Great Write
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14th Nov 2012 4:19pm