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I dance around in peaceful confusion. My eyes have a definitive haze. I have twirled around and around my domestic seclusion; in constant denial of all my pain. I now Tango with the lies of a perfect illusion; without even having a care. Only to open my eyes and return to the world; my sweet illusion is no longer there..............
Published 17th Oct 2012
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17th Oct 2012 1:46pm
17th Oct 2012 1:53pm
Thank you Travis! I have a zillion thoughts a minute. I just wish I could pull them all together.
18th Oct 2012 1:49am
You should write songs too!
this sounds like the first stanza tgo a kick ass song girl!
keep going.... keep going!
and welcome to DUP!
Fire
this sounds like the first stanza tgo a kick ass song girl!
keep going.... keep going!
and welcome to DUP!
Fire
18th Oct 2012 2:38am
Thank you Firebyrd. I think so too! However the inspiration for this piece is in a bit of a hold up. I am going to have to get back to you on this one.
