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respirator
I'm alive
take my hand
and feel my heart
beat I love you
in morse code
take my hand
and feel my heart
beat I love you
in morse code
Published 17th Oct 2012
| Edited 25th Aug 2018
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
17th Oct 2012 6:32am
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18th Oct 2012 2:14am
Beautiful.....so glad you have found your heart again....
I ....am still searching for mine.
Fire
I ....am still searching for mine.
Fire
18th Oct 2012 2:21am
So heartfelt and endearing...
Wow, what a few words can do the spirit. :-)
You have a way of doing that to the readers!
Thank you, Thank you
Wow, what a few words can do the spirit. :-)
You have a way of doing that to the readers!
Thank you, Thank you
18th Oct 2012 3:24am
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Nov 2012 1:37am
3rd Nov 2012 1:34am
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20th Nov 2012 1:44am
were you in a war
b/c i sense a under current
of it in a lot of your work
good job
b/c i sense a under current
of it in a lot of your work
good job
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2012 2:28am
Beautiful poem. Tender and loving! :)
17th Mar 2015 00:27am
You are REALLY very talented! This is so beautiful. I think I felt my heart skip a beat.
