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The Ring part 1
That diamond ring she's sporting,
doesn't sparkle like it used to,
she just doesn't understand.
It always shown so brilliantly,
when it was on another hand.
it sits upon your finger,
of you it is not a part.
Too ashamed to give it's beauty,
because you tore away it's heart.
What once gave brilliance of light,
now sits alone and cries.
The gem turning milky,
a victim of your lies.
It now holds only value,
it's beauty is no more.
You ripped it from it's righful heir,
it sparkles never more.
KWB2012
doesn't sparkle like it used to,
she just doesn't understand.
It always shown so brilliantly,
when it was on another hand.
it sits upon your finger,
of you it is not a part.
Too ashamed to give it's beauty,
because you tore away it's heart.
What once gave brilliance of light,
now sits alone and cries.
The gem turning milky,
a victim of your lies.
It now holds only value,
it's beauty is no more.
You ripped it from it's righful heir,
it sparkles never more.
KWB2012
Published 16th Oct 2012
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16th Oct 2012 1:53am
It now holds only value,
it's beauty is no more.
You ripped it from it's righful heir,
it sparkles never more.
WOW!!!!!!!!!! Absolutely powerful, and that stanza I love, "You ripped ir from it's rightful heir" brilliant line, very well done Sir.
it's beauty is no more.
You ripped it from it's righful heir,
it sparkles never more.
WOW!!!!!!!!!! Absolutely powerful, and that stanza I love, "You ripped ir from it's rightful heir" brilliant line, very well done Sir.
16th Oct 2012 2:08am
20th Oct 2012 9:54pm
very real! lots of emotion and genuine content! save the commas n periods!;( let the words say when to stop! it just creates clutter... keep grindin ;)
21st Oct 2012 1:20am
24th Oct 2012 5:44am
