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Author's note: I feel compelled to state that I never condone rape. A woman should be able to wear anything she wants without a guy thinking the clothes give him a license to violate her. This is more about my warped mind. Rest assured that even if I am thinking it, I am the last person to ACT out on my twisted meanings without consent.
In my little world there are meanings
for the wardrobe of a lady
But in case you get confused
no my name is not Slim Shady
Let's start with the shoes some women take so to heart
Hundreds they may have
even some with whom
They will never part
Now flats are safe in general
but a raised arch grabs the eye
Has me so thinking
what heaven is between those thighs?
The color also factors
darker or drab not quite the thing
A bright yellow, red or pink
like a bell that lust does sing
Now as for the color black
a tough one to attach meaning
Could just be for business
an executive with a powerful teaming
That area of the anatomy my biggest weakness
for you see with the legs quite easy in my book
stockings, pantyhose, or such leggings
always make me want to look
For just having hosiery on
sparks my desire oh so much
Even with an un noteable figure
triggers a longing to touch
Seamed stockings, runs, tears or fishnets
oh yes what do I see
That lass is ripe and ready
for a hot seductive plea
Now some may talk about the length of the dress
but more is to be said
Because a slit can also be revealing
in wanting her in my bed
So too is the fit
tight or more relaxed
Can the lines of undergarments be detected
femininity to the max
Who can not look at the booty
not only what is worn
But the way that it bounces
Closer baby let's make our own porn
But the biggest suggestion
is the eyes or the look
Inviting others to examine her
a closed or open book
For some women can simply look at you
and the mind goes to a naughty place
Having nothing to do with wardrobe
just wanting to share body space
More common is that expression
dude don't mess with me if you know what's best
'Cause if you get into it with me
without a doubt you will flunk this test
So really what I am saying is although
I won't respond with a domineering act
that my mind does record
what turns on or oils my tracks
Leads me thinking of that woman
when home and alone
May trigger a verse or two
or the guitar's rhythmic tone
In my little world there are meanings
for the wardrobe of a lady
But in case you get confused
no my name is not Slim Shady
Let's start with the shoes some women take so to heart
Hundreds they may have
even some with whom
They will never part
Now flats are safe in general
but a raised arch grabs the eye
Has me so thinking
what heaven is between those thighs?
The color also factors
darker or drab not quite the thing
A bright yellow, red or pink
like a bell that lust does sing
Now as for the color black
a tough one to attach meaning
Could just be for business
an executive with a powerful teaming
That area of the anatomy my biggest weakness
for you see with the legs quite easy in my book
stockings, pantyhose, or such leggings
always make me want to look
For just having hosiery on
sparks my desire oh so much
Even with an un noteable figure
triggers a longing to touch
Seamed stockings, runs, tears or fishnets
oh yes what do I see
That lass is ripe and ready
for a hot seductive plea
Now some may talk about the length of the dress
but more is to be said
Because a slit can also be revealing
in wanting her in my bed
So too is the fit
tight or more relaxed
Can the lines of undergarments be detected
femininity to the max
Who can not look at the booty
not only what is worn
But the way that it bounces
Closer baby let's make our own porn
But the biggest suggestion
is the eyes or the look
Inviting others to examine her
a closed or open book
For some women can simply look at you
and the mind goes to a naughty place
Having nothing to do with wardrobe
just wanting to share body space
More common is that expression
dude don't mess with me if you know what's best
'Cause if you get into it with me
without a doubt you will flunk this test
So really what I am saying is although
I won't respond with a domineering act
that my mind does record
what turns on or oils my tracks
Leads me thinking of that woman
when home and alone
May trigger a verse or two
or the guitar's rhythmic tone
Published 14th Oct 2012
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- Edited 14th Oct 2012 2:30pm
14th Oct 2012 2:29pm
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Actually your review wasn't that confusing. I didn't mention the context. For example, if you are my principal and you wear a black dress, pearls, and pumps to the school, you aren't getting much of a reaction from me. Change that to a nightclub or diner, and not being my boss, and you get a different response.
As for cleavage, well that will be noticed anyway, which is why I usually go for eye contact. One advantage of being a "leg guy" is it is easier to look without being obvious. (could just be looking at something on the ground, etc.)
I also think the sexiest thing a woman can wear is a smile, but again, that is just me.
Thanks for the comment and read!
As for cleavage, well that will be noticed anyway, which is why I usually go for eye contact. One advantage of being a "leg guy" is it is easier to look without being obvious. (could just be looking at something on the ground, etc.)
I also think the sexiest thing a woman can wear is a smile, but again, that is just me.
Thanks for the comment and read!
17th Oct 2012 4:05pm
oh...that was clever bro. looking down without being obvious...the thing is I can look at a woman's eyes and boobs simultaneously (LOL) without being noticed.
Hi Jazzmanor,
I found this poem interesting because it is from a man's point of view. It seems a lot of men hold a similar viewpoint and are always ready to visually assess a woman's desirability, which is why I dress so as to avert as much of that as possible. You would not like the way I dress judging from your description in this poem. I keep things neutral, earthy and covered up, plus for the most part I only wear cotton. The ladies are still checking me out -- certain ones that is, and men that are able to see through to my soul. As for the rest of the men, god bless em, most of them are so yiksey, one can be glad if their attention goes elsewhere. he he he :)
I found this poem interesting because it is from a man's point of view. It seems a lot of men hold a similar viewpoint and are always ready to visually assess a woman's desirability, which is why I dress so as to avert as much of that as possible. You would not like the way I dress judging from your description in this poem. I keep things neutral, earthy and covered up, plus for the most part I only wear cotton. The ladies are still checking me out -- certain ones that is, and men that are able to see through to my soul. As for the rest of the men, god bless em, most of them are so yiksey, one can be glad if their attention goes elsewhere. he he he :)
As I said in a prior comment, the place is important too. For example if you are in a club, it may not matter what you are wearing if there is a facial recognition or an exchange of smiles.
If I am teaching, a woman could be wearing the skimpiest outfit and I am reacting the same---actually in an education environment I would probably have a negative impression. (not so much if college but big time at high school or below)
If I am teaching, a woman could be wearing the skimpiest outfit and I am reacting the same---actually in an education environment I would probably have a negative impression. (not so much if college but big time at high school or below)
15th Oct 2012 11:36pm
I applaud your honesty... much needed because qwe as women need a birds eye view on how men see us at times.....I myself am a long sundress wearing
sistah with locks then sometimes I wear tight jeans and heels then other times I wear leggins and thigh high boots with a bustier1 so it just depends but regardless of what I weart I ALWAYS get respect! because no matter the clothing
my facial expressions say ....I wish a man WOULD say something crazy to me! LOL
great write!
Fire
sistah with locks then sometimes I wear tight jeans and heels then other times I wear leggins and thigh high boots with a bustier1 so it just depends but regardless of what I weart I ALWAYS get respect! because no matter the clothing
my facial expressions say ....I wish a man WOULD say something crazy to me! LOL
great write!
Fire
16th Oct 2012 6:26am
I think there is a difference between crazy and lewd. Guys can come up with very corny lines but they aren't necessarily offensive.
Really for me the first thing I look for is a wedding ring. If I see one of those it doesn't matter what outfit is on.
Thanks for the read
Really for me the first thing I look for is a wedding ring. If I see one of those it doesn't matter what outfit is on.
Thanks for the read
17th Oct 2012 4:07pm
This is in line with my favorite poem:
"If eyes are made for seeing,
then beauty is its own excuse for being..."
nicely crafted; I enjoyed it...
"If eyes are made for seeing,
then beauty is its own excuse for being..."
nicely crafted; I enjoyed it...
thanks buddy! They say that they eyes can do so much especially when they are open or looking beyond the surface...
17th Oct 2012 4:35pm
Jazz, without getting into the politics of this, let me just say that I feel you my brother and I am fully affirmed. LOL
Well thought out intellectual write...
Well thought out intellectual write...
18th Oct 2012 00:19am
I am honored with such a distinction, even if people in the south can't understand me because at the least the waitresses say I have a "California accent"!
18th Oct 2012 5:45pm
Hi bro...just to let you know it doesn't take that long to learn that southern drawl. When I was in Nashville in the 90's, I acquired the accent having nobody to talk but my co-workers.
20th Oct 2012 3:49pm
Jazz, this is an erotic piece full of class. I learned a little about you from the comments. You're from Cali? You are a teacher? How about giving me a private sex ed class and show me what you want me to do to you!
Holly
Holly
20th Oct 2012 4:10pm
Born in Los Angeles. Moved to Victorville when my dad had enough of the gang shootings. (The house is 2 blocks from LA High)
I taught special education (history and exploratory arts) for 5 years. Might have to brush up on that topic!
I taught special education (history and exploratory arts) for 5 years. Might have to brush up on that topic!
20th Oct 2012 8:10pm
Quite an interesting, insightful and unique outlook. Imagination expanding through attire and capturing on individual styles.
Quite interesting! ... Well done!
Quite interesting! ... Well done!
20th Oct 2012 8:17pm
Well thanks---I must confess that your critique is perhaps more elegant then the words I wrote but I thank you for reading!
23rd Oct 2012 1:33pm
I LOVE the whole imagery in this... but perhaps it is because I have always been most attracted to a person's eyes and have also been told that my eyes are my best festure.
But the biggest suggestion
is the eyes or the look
Inviting others to examine her
a closed or open book
For some women can simply look at you
and the mind goes to a naughty place
Having nothing to do with wardrobe
just wanting to share body space
More common is that expression
dude don't mess with me if you know what's best
'Cause if you get into it with me
without a doubt you will flunk this test
Other than that, I don't understand why you were concerned that people would think you were somehow condoning rape or sex by force in this piece. As a rape survivor (read my poem "I Still Remember")as well as a feminist, I am usually on high alert for such buried messages but did not see that at all in this piece. Yes, many women do dress to gain or avoid the male gaze. Personally, I do the same, depending on the man/men and the situations in question.
But the biggest suggestion
is the eyes or the look
Inviting others to examine her
a closed or open book
For some women can simply look at you
and the mind goes to a naughty place
Having nothing to do with wardrobe
just wanting to share body space
More common is that expression
dude don't mess with me if you know what's best
'Cause if you get into it with me
without a doubt you will flunk this test
Other than that, I don't understand why you were concerned that people would think you were somehow condoning rape or sex by force in this piece. As a rape survivor (read my poem "I Still Remember")as well as a feminist, I am usually on high alert for such buried messages but did not see that at all in this piece. Yes, many women do dress to gain or avoid the male gaze. Personally, I do the same, depending on the man/men and the situations in question.
24th Oct 2012 11:06pm
Mostly because I would hear frat guys talking about girls they knew "wanted it" because of what they were wearing. I was quite shocked for I have always felt that even the not revealing outfit isn't a excuse for sex without consent. What I was trying to say is that all men probably can think of something they find sexier compared to other outfits on a member of the opposite sex. I think the same goes for women.
