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Hell..
Laying in shatterd glass
Heart beatting fast,
Hands tied
Mind blind.
Bleeding out in the dark,
All because of a broken heart..
Just tear me apart,
Finish the start..
Bloody bady art,
Your face next to a rose.
Touched by death,
You will be my last thought,
On my dying breath...
Heart beatting fast,
Hands tied
Mind blind.
Bleeding out in the dark,
All because of a broken heart..
Just tear me apart,
Finish the start..
Bloody bady art,
Your face next to a rose.
Touched by death,
You will be my last thought,
On my dying breath...
Published 14th Oct 2012
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14th Oct 2012 8:32am
i love it,
but in the first stanzer you said "laying in shatter glass"
i think you mean"laying in shatterd glass" i loved the poem deeply so much meaning verry littlw words!!
but in the first stanzer you said "laying in shatter glass"
i think you mean"laying in shatterd glass" i loved the poem deeply so much meaning verry littlw words!!
