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23rd May 2010 5:26am
In fate, you would be bound to a world of sorrow; for your soul may need to be punished.
Without fate, in a world of chance, you then would be troubling yourself with the thought of being alienated from a place where you belong. Though, if you let this ill longing last, you will only break what you now possess.
Without fate, in a world of chance, you then would be troubling yourself with the thought of being alienated from a place where you belong. Though, if you let this ill longing last, you will only break what you now possess.
24th May 2010 5:00pm
your comment is longer than my poem. that amuses me. I like your view on it. its a very depresing situation
1st Nov 2010 8:09pm
Just two lines and yet so powerful and thought provoking and my experience very true! Love it
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