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Birthday wish
Today was my birthday
My only wish was to have you again
The presents I got meant nothing to me if you aren't by my side
I couldn't shake this feeling that you would jump out at any moment
But you didn't
You couldn't
I felt you so close to me but know your so far
I wish I could have another birthday
With you
I want all these things I know I can't have
I guess it's true when they say you shouldn't say your wish out loud
If might not come true..
My only wish was to have you again
The presents I got meant nothing to me if you aren't by my side
I couldn't shake this feeling that you would jump out at any moment
But you didn't
You couldn't
I felt you so close to me but know your so far
I wish I could have another birthday
With you
I want all these things I know I can't have
I guess it's true when they say you shouldn't say your wish out loud
If might not come true..
Published 7th Oct 2012
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7th Oct 2012 10:51am
That was beautiful and sad, thank you.
In the third line I think 'be' should be 'me'.
Happy Birthday.
Duncan
In the third line I think 'be' should be 'me'.
Happy Birthday.
Duncan
7th Oct 2012 4:26pm
Thank you Duncan I don't know how I missed that. Changed it now though, but thanks for your comment
7th Oct 2012 7:55pm
always remember that you will have many more birthdays, she will be there for all of them <3
