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Could I Be?
The smoothness of his words
Float in my subconscious
Whispering endearments
Not giving me a choice
My heart beats to a tempo
Predetermined by the gods
Only he can scramble it
Causing a quickness with his laugh
With an accent so sexy
enticing a smile from my lips
He has no idea of this
For I hide behind distance
Can he hear the sadness in my voice
My heart bleeds for his loss
As he still struggles
Trying to mend his broken heart
The love of his life
No longer walking by his side
All he has now is memories
And photos in frames
He will remember her
Her laugh, the way that she lit up the room
The special loving moments
His one and only true love
He is a lost soul
Wandering australia alone
Searching for the one
To rekindle the fire within
Could I be her?
Float in my subconscious
Whispering endearments
Not giving me a choice
My heart beats to a tempo
Predetermined by the gods
Only he can scramble it
Causing a quickness with his laugh
With an accent so sexy
enticing a smile from my lips
He has no idea of this
For I hide behind distance
Can he hear the sadness in my voice
My heart bleeds for his loss
As he still struggles
Trying to mend his broken heart
The love of his life
No longer walking by his side
All he has now is memories
And photos in frames
He will remember her
Her laugh, the way that she lit up the room
The special loving moments
His one and only true love
He is a lost soul
Wandering australia alone
Searching for the one
To rekindle the fire within
Could I be her?
Published 5th Oct 2012
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5th Oct 2012 5:06am
I hope for you that you are ;)
sweet romantic piece here...
Its Nice seeing your heartfelt words again!
sweet romantic piece here...
Its Nice seeing your heartfelt words again!
9th Oct 2012 9:00am
Thankx Milkyway,
It is good to be back... I am hoping i am too...Thankx for the comment...
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
It is good to be back... I am hoping i am too...Thankx for the comment...
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
5th Oct 2012 6:54am
Wow...that's a change of pace to what I am use to reading from you. But as always a beautiful work of art even if it is a sadden tail. As beautiful as you are you shall or should never be alone. Kudos on the write dear.
9th Oct 2012 9:09am
Hi atropabelladonna,
You never know what you are going to get with me.. I have many sides... Some of which I don't show very often... I kinda lost my way there for a while - and after someone very special to me came into my life ... Inspiration has been rekindled... I have him to thank for the rejuvenation of "vixen"... Only after a lot of prompting, I might add..
It feels really good to be back.
Brace yourself my friend... Iam back with a vengence!
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
You never know what you are going to get with me.. I have many sides... Some of which I don't show very often... I kinda lost my way there for a while - and after someone very special to me came into my life ... Inspiration has been rekindled... I have him to thank for the rejuvenation of "vixen"... Only after a lot of prompting, I might add..
It feels really good to be back.
Brace yourself my friend... Iam back with a vengence!
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
5th Oct 2012 7:32am
This is melancholy like that shared song that will never let you forget like in Casablanca!
Very elegant poem!
Very elegant poem!
Hi jazz,
As usual, you are very kind with your words of encouragement. Melancholy... Yes, I think so...
I look forward to many more comments from you. Athough .... Elegant .... My poetry has never been called that... I am a little bit flattered.. Thank you.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
As usual, you are very kind with your words of encouragement. Melancholy... Yes, I think so...
I look forward to many more comments from you. Athough .... Elegant .... My poetry has never been called that... I am a little bit flattered.. Thank you.
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
5th Oct 2012 10:32am
Sweet and sad poetry.
Writing for the one you love, helps him feel close to your heart.
Welcome back.
You can not imagine how much I am pleased to read your words.
Writing for the one you love, helps him feel close to your heart.
Welcome back.
You can not imagine how much I am pleased to read your words.
9th Oct 2012 9:22am
Hi luca,
It has been so long, I almost forgot the name of the site!! Just joking ;-)
I hope that he knows how much he really means to me... He is my inspiration at the moment... And it is my way to let him know how he is the one to make my heart beat a little faster...
I will try to be a little more regular with my poetry now luca...
Thank you my Italian friend - I really value your comments
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
It has been so long, I almost forgot the name of the site!! Just joking ;-)
I hope that he knows how much he really means to me... He is my inspiration at the moment... And it is my way to let him know how he is the one to make my heart beat a little faster...
I will try to be a little more regular with my poetry now luca...
Thank you my Italian friend - I really value your comments
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
12th Oct 2012 3:49am
It's been a looooong time vixen and you've come back stronger than ever, loved it, so very poignant and heartfelt, brought back memories of long ago, that tug at the heart strings of love lost! :-) Cheers
