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A Satirical Piece
My eyelids feel like magnets
Snaping together on their own
My joints turn to dust
On, I just can’t go
Vines pull my tiring soul into the earth
I know I must give in
Alas, I can not
My body is still ticking
I can not rest
Up forever like the undead
My head will explode
Until death
Snaping together on their own
My joints turn to dust
On, I just can’t go
Vines pull my tiring soul into the earth
I know I must give in
Alas, I can not
My body is still ticking
I can not rest
Up forever like the undead
My head will explode
Until death
Published 4th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2012 1:08pm
Satire: the use of irony, sarcasm, ridicule, or the like, in exposing, denouncing, or deriding vice, folly, etc.
I wish I got this Levi, help me understand the piece a little- Are you ripping the behaviour of certain individuals on this site, or are you ripping yourself? I just need this certain level of explanation to be able to enjoy the piece.
Short and sweet however. Sturdy.
I wish I got this Levi, help me understand the piece a little- Are you ripping the behaviour of certain individuals on this site, or are you ripping yourself? I just need this certain level of explanation to be able to enjoy the piece.
Short and sweet however. Sturdy.
4th Oct 2012 3:56pm
I am actually Exaggerating, I was really tired at the time, so I decided to write a piece about being sleepy, using satire, something we went over in English class over the week.
4th Oct 2012 7:24pm
Man, I only got three hours sleep last night and I still got stuff to do... this poem is not helping.. zzzzzzz
(Good write)
(Good write)
4th Oct 2012 7:48pm
