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Hip-Hop pt. 1

uh,as my pen sheds a tear for her
i just want her to know that i was here for her
but we broke up cause she was caught up in the business
loving the fame,but she wasn't really up for commitment
i wanted to marry her, spend the rest of our lives
together and forever while we musically strive
n then she got sick n it all turned to tragedy
she held me down, but now i don't go by the laws of gravity
and actually, the mirror shows me the true reality
that the reason why she's sick is cause the music is her casualty
i even noticed a change in her, n she wanted a change in me
but i wasn't gonna change a thing for love i'll remain v.i.p
i just gotta call sayin that now she will rest in peace
n i visit her everyday,go to her grave n just speak sorrily
good bye hip-hop,u were my first love n u will always be
i love u baby,but the end is finally here for you and me
Written by vipbaby (V.I.P)
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