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This Dreamer's Dream Went Wrong!
Am I the dreamer?
Or am I the dream?
Am I the centre?
Or just in-between?
Am I the keeper?
Or Am I the kept?
Am I the weepier?
Who weeps with the rest?
Am I the drop?
Or am I the ocean?
Do I rule with my heart?
Or rule with emotion?
Am I the many?
Who outweigh the few?
Im Out with the old?
And In with the new?
Am I the right?
Or am I the wrong?
if I am, then this
Dreamer’s dream went wrong!
Am I the high?
Or one of the low………?
……Fucked if I know!!!
Or am I the dream?
Am I the centre?
Or just in-between?
Am I the keeper?
Or Am I the kept?
Am I the weepier?
Who weeps with the rest?
Am I the drop?
Or am I the ocean?
Do I rule with my heart?
Or rule with emotion?
Am I the many?
Who outweigh the few?
Im Out with the old?
And In with the new?
Am I the right?
Or am I the wrong?
if I am, then this
Dreamer’s dream went wrong!
Am I the high?
Or one of the low………?
……Fucked if I know!!!
Published 22nd Sep 2012
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22nd Sep 2012 3:51pm
"Am I the dreamer?
Or am I the dream?
Am I the centre?
Or just in-between?
Am I the keeper?
Or Am I the kept?..."
Love these lines!
Or am I the dream?
Am I the centre?
Or just in-between?
Am I the keeper?
Or Am I the kept?..."
Love these lines!
22nd Sep 2012 9:42pm
22nd Sep 2012 6:10pm
I really liked this. I kinda felt like it ended sort of abruptly, but still liked it very much.
22nd Sep 2012 9:44pm
Thanks very much, i kind of like the way it ended it seemed to me are "thinker" was maybe thinking to much and then just gave up and took part in some other enderver, that was my thinking lol
Thank you so much for enjoying, it means a lot
zenith
Thank you so much for enjoying, it means a lot
zenith
22nd Sep 2012 10:36pm
22nd Sep 2012 11:07pm
