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The Drowning Mind
Submersed
unable to breath
lungs of fire
my mind wonders
thinking
while
sinking
to the bottom
of the sea
knowing
feeling
alive
unable to stop
the drowning mind
brilliant colors flash
red
blue
purple
the end nears
the brain slows
memories fade away
life
passing
gone
unable to breath
lungs of fire
my mind wonders
thinking
while
sinking
to the bottom
of the sea
knowing
feeling
alive
unable to stop
the drowning mind
brilliant colors flash
red
blue
purple
the end nears
the brain slows
memories fade away
life
passing
gone
Published 21st Sep 2012
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21st Sep 2012 3:09pm
Not a spec of material,
"Civilization" in sight......
I love this trail of pure Spirit
Ms. nikkimoe...
awesome......
21st Sep 2012 5:01pm
"Knowing ,Feeling, Alive,Unable to stop"
Perfect, A joy to read
Keep up the good work
Zenith
Perfect, A joy to read
Keep up the good work
Zenith
22nd Sep 2012 00:58am
Yes this write is etheral, and translucent in essence...
simply beautiful@!
Fire
simply beautiful@!
Fire
unable to breathe*
lungs of fire
my mind wonders
thinking
while
sinking
to the bottom
.
.
.
unable to stop
the drowning mind
brilliant colors flash
nice lines... though the only error here would be that a wandering mind is now drowning. you could have come into that a little more elaborately.
lungs of fire
my mind wonders
thinking
while
sinking
to the bottom
.
.
.
unable to stop
the drowning mind
brilliant colors flash
nice lines... though the only error here would be that a wandering mind is now drowning. you could have come into that a little more elaborately.
