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Into Thin Air
9-18-12
Into Thin Air
Dissolving into a sea of tears,
Stricken down by my worst nightmares and fears,
That have transcended into my reality
Reckless morbid thoughts come to me casually
Sweet dreams of death infatuate me
Living has become my great demise
Lying to myself, persistently asking why am I even alive
Nothing here can ease the aches, or bring me happiness
I’ve tried to ease my pain; I’ve tried to erase it from my mind,
Pretend it’s not there. Trying to forget, pretending I don’t fucking care
But the wounds never heal, the pain only rises leaving me impaired
Suffocating within my own thoughts, wishing to disappear,
To completely vanish into the cold thin air…
Into Thin Air
Dissolving into a sea of tears,
Stricken down by my worst nightmares and fears,
That have transcended into my reality
Reckless morbid thoughts come to me casually
Sweet dreams of death infatuate me
Living has become my great demise
Lying to myself, persistently asking why am I even alive
Nothing here can ease the aches, or bring me happiness
I’ve tried to ease my pain; I’ve tried to erase it from my mind,
Pretend it’s not there. Trying to forget, pretending I don’t fucking care
But the wounds never heal, the pain only rises leaving me impaired
Suffocating within my own thoughts, wishing to disappear,
To completely vanish into the cold thin air…
Published 18th Sep 2012
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19th Sep 2012 4:27am
Great imagery and flow. Life attacks with no remorse until you are left with nothing more.
19th Sep 2012 5:56am
Thanks dear. I think it needs something more..just not too sure what yet..
8th Dec 2012 11:39pm
poem comment above...and yet here you still are so maybe there is that strong but dificult emotion of hope to see somewhere.
Great read with smooth presentation...thanks for sharing it
Great read with smooth presentation...thanks for sharing it
