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Godsound
(written for 20 word challenge)
The Bible
is the word of god
but
no more so
than Moby Dick, or
the graffiti on restroom walls
The Bible
is the word of god
but
no more so
than Moby Dick, or
the graffiti on restroom walls
Published 17th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2012 5:31pm
Well done lightbaron.
Good Luck.
Strider
Good Luck.
Strider
17th Sep 2012 5:42pm
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18th Sep 2012 00:41am
I have to put a 6. if I don't my catholic roots will come creep up on me and bite me.
18th Sep 2012 1:03am
Ha...no worries toots... I dont have catholic roots, but if I did I would bite them back... Always a pleasure to see ya
18th Sep 2012 5:31am
I'll take bathroom grafitti over an ancient book any day. Sweet little write you've got here ;)
Write on
Write on
18th Sep 2012 5:47am
Yeah the ol book is terribly boring,but couple decent yarns in there...bathroom graf always good...seen one said "hoof hearted, ice melted"...gospel..ha.thank ya kindly for reading and commenting ms.redapples or is eveate?
18th Sep 2012 6:10am
10th Oct 2012 10:05am
FUCKING AWESOME! Hemmingway entered the 6 word story contest with "For sale: Baby Shoes. Never worn." Yours reaches further. Not everyone will ever be a parent. Everyone in the western world used public bathrooms.
11th Oct 2012 4:22pm
