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Stuck In A Stare
Standing somewhere
close to a window
looking out
at nothing
I start to get that feeling
the feel good stare
my eyes are buzzed
stuck
stuck in a stare
it feels great
staring at nothing
feeling high
the feel good stare
no way to induce it
it just happens
locked in
someone is calling my name
I do not want to break away
the feel good stare
naturally high
close to a window
looking out
at nothing
I start to get that feeling
the feel good stare
my eyes are buzzed
stuck
stuck in a stare
it feels great
staring at nothing
feeling high
the feel good stare
no way to induce it
it just happens
locked in
someone is calling my name
I do not want to break away
the feel good stare
naturally high
Published 5th Sep 2012
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5th Sep 2012 3:34pm
An apparently simple poem that grows on the reader. It dissects a moment, a feeling. Interesting.
5th Sep 2012 3:35pm
5th Sep 2012 3:36pm
Content staring at nothing while your head is gone.
I know that feeling well, and you executed the concept well.
You seem to be a writing machine at the moment; must be all the lost staring. :)
I know that feeling well, and you executed the concept well.
You seem to be a writing machine at the moment; must be all the lost staring. :)
5th Sep 2012 3:39pm
5th Sep 2012 4:21pm
5th Sep 2012 4:39pm
5th Sep 2012 8:29pm
The ultimate pleasure,
IE: the absence of suffering:
Nothingness
MUCH healthier getting it from the momentary
stare than a whole bottle of 151 Baccardi ---
( my former technique )
5th Sep 2012 8:45pm
6th Sep 2012 1:09pm
Awesome, unfortunately I don't possess that, you don't know it but i've read quite alot of what you have been generous enough to share, I
didn't know that anyone could write like that.
Sabbath
didn't know that anyone could write like that.
Sabbath
6th Sep 2012 2:23pm
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